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October

First breath of winter
Hangs in the air around us
The chill ignites me

Written by Daisy_Kyriss

Published 10th Feb 2011

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yes, I like this.

Anonymous

10th Feb 2011 1:30pm

Great little haiku-esque note, that suggests something exciting in its final line.

Good work,

S

same here--

10th Feb 2011 2:51pm

I like this too... short but i felt every word!

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indeed

Anonymous

- Edited 17th Feb 2011 4:50pm

17th Feb 2011 4:49pm

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18th Feb 2011 3:20am

I usually try to incorporate nature into my haikus. I felt this one met that qualification.

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