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MIND SCREAM
If your lust ever comes my way, I can give us a sweet place too play. The sensuous way sexy you responded too my kisses, made my mind scream. Succulent sugar lips feel soft and juicy, stirring an erection within me. Excited like the Forth of July, but not ready too pop yet. Kissing my way down every inch of your body, I linger at Beautiful breasts. Capped with pretty areolas and hard nipples just wanting to be sucked and tongue washed over. You caress my head and rub shoulders as I suckle sweet nipples. So wet already I take a long slow lick across your juicy honeypot, making you squirm and sigh. Up, down and around I bury my face intoo you and you begin to ramble too me "Ooh my God, oooOOH I love the way you eat my pussy". Your HOT body made those familiar movements while grabbing sheets. Clamping lips too clit, sexy you pressed face too honeypot nearly screaming, "I'm gonna cum, Ooooo Yeessss make me cuuummm" and the hungry demon in me didn't let up. I kept on eating through two heavenly orgasms, slurping warm flowing honey as you gasp hard and heavy. With a couple of playful smacks to such a gorgeous ass, I flip onto my back so you can ride. Easing down this nine step program, "Yeessssss" groaned from just kissed lips. Pinching my nipples you grind your ass on pelvis and ride like life depended. Hair tossing with breasts bouncing up and down I grip each cheek and give each cheek another slap. Cumming twice more and read too cum myself I hump hips hard and fast like a wild stallion, harder and deeper. And as I came, sexy you came with me so loud, neighbors heard your mind scream...
Sir Lancelott
Sir Lancelott
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31st Dec 2013 10:13pm
Mind blowing encountering...like taking the nine step program, hum, nicely written :)~
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1st Jan 2014 9:01pm
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31st Dec 2013 10:35pm
That is a worthy end of 2013 :-). Heard your mind screams loud and clear! A super hot write for sure! Have a good year 2014, Lance!
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1st Jan 2014 9:03pm
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31st Dec 2013 10:47pm
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31st Dec 2013 11:06pm
Whoa, yea I can her screaming too bro! lol
Hot stuff erupting from your pen dude! :)
Hot stuff erupting from your pen dude! :)
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1st Jan 2014 9:06pm
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1st Jan 2014 9:07pm
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1st Jan 2014 5:22pm
Sir Lancelot, my knight,
The sensuality of thy words resounds within my very core! I can so surely 'hear' the ecstasy of thy lady's pleasure, for it ringeth throughout the entire kingdom! (GOL!)
From thy quill, on parchment,such pleasurable passion--indeed!!
The sensuality of thy words resounds within my very core! I can so surely 'hear' the ecstasy of thy lady's pleasure, for it ringeth throughout the entire kingdom! (GOL!)
From thy quill, on parchment,such pleasurable passion--indeed!!
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1st Jan 2014 9:14pm
I adore your very core and appreciate you the very same my sweet Sorceress
Love and thanxx!!
Love and thanxx!!
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1st Jan 2014 5:33pm
DAMN! Must be a hard climax for the neighbors to hear a 'mind' scream....Xo
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1st Jan 2014 9:12pm
It's kinda hard too explain but It's when a woman loses complete control of herself during a really built up orgasm that she's been holding back on...
you know that's my fav pic of you sweets
THANXX RAIN!!
you know that's my fav pic of you sweets
THANXX RAIN!!
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2nd Jan 2014 4:08am
At the very least you give evidence that screaming doesn't have to be a bad thing! Mad props for being able to keep the verb tenses together. The past and the present uses are way beyond my command of language! (I would have gotten lost with my pen)
Also like the way it goes from the potential in the first line to an actual exchange between two people.
Also like the way it goes from the potential in the first line to an actual exchange between two people.
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17th Jan 2014 2:24am
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2nd Jan 2014 10:26am
Nine step programme. A hummanh if ever I heard one. This is truly great erotica and one to get patterings a going. I have more I could say but my review would probably stretch way past the legnth of your piece lol (write) double entendre slipped out but was innocent at the time of tapping. So ill just leave it at Sassy hot work. Syn
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17th Jan 2014 2:26am
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Anonymous
2nd Jan 2014 5:30pm
"Cumming twice more and read too cum myself I hump hips hard and fast like a wild stallion, harder and deeper. And as I came, sexy you came with me so loud, neighbors heard your mind scream... "
That last line! FANTASTIC
This was great to read <3
That last line! FANTASTIC
This was great to read <3
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17th Jan 2014 2:27am
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3rd Jan 2014 8:42pm
You never cease to amaze me. Your wordplay, & description of sexual encounters are always tasteful. I admire that.
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Anonymous
23rd Jan 2014 4:43am
Very sexy awesome read. Enjoyed it much. :)
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23rd Jan 2014 4:48am
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1st Apr 2014 9:43pm
Great diction...that's what always makes your pieces amazing.
I enjoyed reading!
I enjoyed reading!
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1st Apr 2014 9:51pm
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