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I WANT YOU
something about your dick
feels
like magic
its like taken a sip
of something
and after years
i'm still feeling it
you got me locked
no in nor out
your body taste like a drug
i just can't seem
to let go
its like falling asleep
and there you were
between my thighs
i'm dreaming of a whole new world
baby
and as you came
its like
feeling the sun
for the first time
you made me surrender
laying down
all my guards
heaven crumbles tonight
my love
if you ever break
my heart
i want you
no lies
the way you
do me
is unknown
baby
i want you
tonight
i'll take my time
with you
just turn down
the lights
loving the way
you satisfy me
i love it
when you play with my mind
i want you....
something
about your kiss
you feel
like magic
its like
every time
I've taken a sip
of your dick
i can't seem to get
enough of it....
i
want you......
feels
like magic
its like taken a sip
of something
and after years
i'm still feeling it
you got me locked
no in nor out
your body taste like a drug
i just can't seem
to let go
its like falling asleep
and there you were
between my thighs
i'm dreaming of a whole new world
baby
and as you came
its like
feeling the sun
for the first time
you made me surrender
laying down
all my guards
heaven crumbles tonight
my love
if you ever break
my heart
i want you
no lies
the way you
do me
is unknown
baby
i want you
tonight
i'll take my time
with you
just turn down
the lights
loving the way
you satisfy me
i love it
when you play with my mind
i want you....
something
about your kiss
you feel
like magic
its like
every time
I've taken a sip
of your dick
i can't seem to get
enough of it....
i
want you......
Published 30th Dec 2013
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30th Dec 2013 12:02pm
Big ups to you for this ink. At first I was gonna' comment about how there was some subject/verb issues as I read this and then I finally read your profile and I realized that it was your dialect....it was the sound of your homeland that gave it this rhythm and the words took on a different feeling all together. Some would say that the opening line was almost pornographic until.....
......you hear it spoken in your native tongue and then it becomes so much more sensual, more sexy
"....something about your dick
feels
like magic "
Takes me back to Patra, Lady Saw....dancehall. I love that ethnic flava' in your ink.
Very lyrical writing. The musician in me loves this flow.
......you hear it spoken in your native tongue and then it becomes so much more sensual, more sexy
"....something about your dick
feels
like magic "
Takes me back to Patra, Lady Saw....dancehall. I love that ethnic flava' in your ink.
Very lyrical writing. The musician in me loves this flow.
30th Dec 2013 1:44pm
You do!!?? FOR REAL!!?? Wowzers I'm speechless! Lmao
yea, ok so I'm a dreamer shoot me lol
Anyways, yea what MM said then some my friend
this was simply put...HOTT! :)
yea, ok so I'm a dreamer shoot me lol
Anyways, yea what MM said then some my friend
this was simply put...HOTT! :)
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20th Aug 2014 4:40am
HOT as HELL Ms. Sycorah!!
Love the read sweets!!
HOT write!!
Bravo!!
Sir Lancelott
Love the read sweets!!
HOT write!!
Bravo!!
Sir Lancelott
