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Loved
Could I give my heart so easily, I definitely could
From outta nowhere, from words in poetry
With my mind I loved, without being held back
From outta nowhere, from words in poetry
With my mind I loved, without being held back
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Re: Loved
29th Dec 2013 5:38am
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29th Dec 2013 6:37am
Exactly BlackSoul...I didn't know it was even coming.What a great release it is!Thank you for reading. :)
Re: Loved
29th Dec 2013 5:57am
Do that girl. I believe in the saying " love like you've never been hurt" it hasn't always worked for me. But if I don't. How will I know when it will work? But that's me. Great lines Lady. Thank you. xo
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re: Re: Loved
29th Dec 2013 6:40am
It hasn't worked for me either TS. But I want it to.Like you said, if you don't, how will you know?I agree.Thank you for your wonderful words! ;) xo
Re: Loved
Anonymous
29th Dec 2013 7:47am
I really feel and appreciate this piece...*sigh*
thanks for sharing...
thanks for sharing...

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re: Re: Loved
29th Dec 2013 1:32pm
Re: Loved
29th Dec 2013 7:57am
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29th Dec 2013 1:35pm
There's a sexiness to being able to love ones mind! Thank you for reading GW.
Re: Loved
Anonymous
29th Dec 2013 1:53pm
Love is high risk, high reward and the payout is always worth it. That first line evokes that inward debate in me but by the last line, you let us know you made the right choice. Solid words, T.

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29th Dec 2013 2:09pm
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2013 9:49pm
You as well! Hope things have been good!

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Re: Loved
29th Dec 2013 3:39pm
This could speak for all who yearn to say something to a loved/fancied one in verse. (I interpreted it as loving from the mind, more than loving one's own mind.)
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29th Dec 2013 4:00pm
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30th Dec 2013 00:12am
Re: Loved
30th Dec 2013 1:02am
never say sorry
I came back here
to read a gals
three liner ability
to befriend her solely
on poetry
she gave a kick to me
and forgave the creativity
so blessed
I don't reply messages
unless from known ones
But your inner feelings
are so intense
its a joy to read
I think
you scored of all your initial profile
but reading you is a lovely style
rarely one comes across poets
of your caliber
I fear..
I came back here
to read a gals
three liner ability
to befriend her solely
on poetry
she gave a kick to me
and forgave the creativity
so blessed
I don't reply messages
unless from known ones
But your inner feelings
are so intense
its a joy to read
I think
you scored of all your initial profile
but reading you is a lovely style
rarely one comes across poets
of your caliber
I fear..
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re: Re: Loved
30th Dec 2013 1:12am
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30th Dec 2013 1:28am
thank you
now no more credits on this
u know words
once spilled
are like cum
sour or sweet
none can refill
now no more credits on this
u know words
once spilled
are like cum
sour or sweet
none can refill
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Re: Loved
30th Dec 2013 3:31pm
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30th Dec 2013 3:38pm