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In The Coming of Days........(a love letter)
"Loving so good
until it hurts..."
it burns like a
fine Kentucky bourbon
going down slow.....
.....Black Velvet in this little boy's smile
what our minds create
and recreate
in the steam of
lusty erotic dreams
time
after
time
after
time
in the perfection
of our beautiful now
Our love is forever
in this moment
this lifetime.......
…..it's so amazing how we feel each other
emotionally
romantically
spiritually
sexually
in the safety of this sanctuary,
where all that has been missing is found
Our love and
our need for
each other...
…..now it has crested the banks
of the river Atlantis
I can no longer abate this flood
I 've a fever, a deep hunger
No longer two
I must be one with the one I love
In the coming of days.....
300 sunrises
299 moonlit nights
from this moment in our now
I must hold your body tight
…...or I shall surely perish
for the day my hands finally touch your body
and moist, passionate lips share this fire
share this kiss.......
…....our lives will never be the same
to finally capture the feeling
of our skin against each other
to discover the revelation
of warm words
brilliant ink
when we
touch
explore
come
inside each others love
riding each and every breaking wave
until we can no longer breathe
outside the presence
of our love.....
….a space in time
when we shall be
wrapped up in each others arms,
legs, held tightly
between your thighs
climbing upon this virile beast
and taking me out for a spirited ride
your soft tan breast
against white linen
a beautiful moon
that eclipses the heavens
drawing the soul of this man
deeper,
deeper
inside......
feeling the realness
of "him" that you call yours
and finally breaking the will
of this virgin
that I proudly call mine
no one,
nothing
can stop
the yearning
the desire
the heat
the fire
that will consume you and I when
we both hold each other
and speak the words
face to face
heart to heart
for the first time
with outstretched hands
we touch our truth
and nothing
will never, ever
be the same
300 sunrises,
299 evenings filled with
warm, gentle rain
my soul will take flight
upon your pretty wings
Will you dare to
drink from my fountain?
The harmony of one heart beating
An intimate moment in time......
so much better than our now...
…..and never again the same.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tkXNEmtf9tk (Thanks Alannah Myles for reminding me of my eccentricity and Unleashed Heathen for re-directing me back to the movie, "The Lover"....much appreciated Too my #truth, "300 sunrises, 299 evenings filled with warm, gentle rain, I come. Love won't let me wait.... )
Published 29th Dec 2013
| Edited 3rd Jan 2014
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29th Dec 2013 00:36am
29th Dec 2013 00:58am
Thank you Grace.....I think it's wonderful that my ink has a way of connecting the dots : )
29th Dec 2013 2:27am
Speechless....
I truly have no words, this is beyond beautiful, beyond sensual and beyond just a poem...Xoxo
I truly have no words, this is beyond beautiful, beyond sensual and beyond just a poem...Xoxo
It is hopefulness and inevitable reality. It is the beginning of one of the greatest love stories ever written......against all odds. This ink flows like a river, straight to the heart of the matter and that's all that does matter right now....(wow, where did that come from?) : )
Thank you for feeling the depths of these words....
Thank you for feeling the depths of these words....
How sweet it would be to recieve a love letter from you, and to be loved by you. The poem is awesome as usual. Thank you for being inspired.
29th Dec 2013 5:10am
29th Dec 2013 4:45pm
29th Dec 2013 10:15pm
Again by pairing your own words with musical references that I happen to love listening to, and I am lead to thinking of tunes that I haven't heard in ages. Just one of the reasons why I love reading your ink.
Several memorable parts here but my fav has to be, "in the safety of this sanctuary,
where all that has been missing is found"
Several memorable parts here but my fav has to be, "in the safety of this sanctuary,
where all that has been missing is found"
30th Dec 2013 3:08am
Brother Jazz, I am glad that my ink can create a "multimedia experience" to those who come in contact with it. Thank you for being a supporter and always lending honest commentary. U R appreciated. : )
30th Dec 2013 4:06pm
"Loving so good
until it hurts..."
it burns like a
fine Kentucky bourbon
going down slow.....
.....Black Velvet in this little boy's smile
what our minds create
Very sensual . Love it .
until it hurts..."
it burns like a
fine Kentucky bourbon
going down slow.....
.....Black Velvet in this little boy's smile
what our minds create
Very sensual . Love it .
30th Dec 2013 7:23pm
