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Flames of Love
The shadow dance begins
Senses breathing vanilla essence
Warm liquid blankets over,
leaning back
Into you
Once more
Drifting
Dreaming
Moments I have created
Desiring the tranquil waters
Your voice dancing with the shadows
With mine
Embracing
Like a lovers kiss
Into the night
Boxed away
To be opened with care
When we take to tranquil waters
Senses breathing vanilla essence
Warm liquid blankets over,
leaning back
Into you
Once more
Drifting
Dreaming
Moments I have created
Desiring the tranquil waters
Your voice dancing with the shadows
With mine
Embracing
Like a lovers kiss
Into the night
Boxed away
To be opened with care
When we take to tranquil waters
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Re: Flames of Love
26th Dec 2013 2:30pm
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27th Dec 2013 5:51am
Re: Flames of Love
27th Dec 2013 1:17am
I think Mr H put it well Ms Rose. Peacefully tender. Lovely. Thank you M'dear.
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27th Dec 2013 5:52am
Re: Flames of Love
27th Dec 2013 1:53am
A lovely Boxing Day dream :) Would tranquil waters be nice...although perhaps a bit boring :D
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