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Dearest Ballad
Your neck embellished with a golden
necklace, a cross and a picture.
Your hands as smooth and
as pale as a cloud.
† to my Dearest 22/2/2010
necklace, a cross and a picture.
Your hands as smooth and
as pale as a cloud.
† to my Dearest 22/2/2010
Published 8th Feb 2011
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8th Feb 2011 8:03pm
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9th Feb 2011 12:44pm
is that you are capable of magnifying the things to reality before your readers. Like this golden necklace of your grandma in your previous poems too, but then this time you zoomed it more and still brought fresher emotions. Your wound is still afresh and I know and now understand very much that it will remain forever. Beautifully extended and bespectaled your readers. I must say poetry in true form that one must admire.
9th Feb 2011 3:50pm
oh my dear Raja
you have brought tears in my eyes with this comment of yours.
your comment made my day and i can't thank you enough.
indeed i will never heal from her loss and i don't want to
you have brought tears in my eyes with this comment of yours.
your comment made my day and i can't thank you enough.
indeed i will never heal from her loss and i don't want to
9th Feb 2011 5:15pm
You're one of the best at making a long story and full meaning out of so few words. Well done.
9th Feb 2011 6:44pm
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