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Extra Beats for two
I'd like to say your on the back burner
Switched my thoughts
Today of all days
Putting you on a low flame
I cannot
My heart wont allow
Thirty minutes to pass
Before it gives out an extra beat
Just one more than usual
One
For my thoughts of you
So today I'll be even more quiet
But every thirty minutes
Maybe less
You and me on my mind
Creating extra beats
With love
Switched my thoughts
Today of all days
Putting you on a low flame
I cannot
My heart wont allow
Thirty minutes to pass
Before it gives out an extra beat
Just one more than usual
One
For my thoughts of you
So today I'll be even more quiet
But every thirty minutes
Maybe less
You and me on my mind
Creating extra beats
With love
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Re: Extra Beats for two
25th Dec 2013 8:14am
This piece is heartwarming! Filled with the yearnings of falling in love. Well done Rose!
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25th Dec 2013 8:15am
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25th Dec 2013 9:20am
Can't be having all the loved up bits without a side order of what the hell just happened?
These soul weaving gods are a devilish lot
Underpaid
So throw the odd stitch
Oopsie..
These soul weaving gods are a devilish lot
Underpaid
So throw the odd stitch
Oopsie..
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25th Dec 2013 10:49am
The odd stitch being, what the hell happened to all of the loved up bits?
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25th Dec 2013 8:08pm
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25th Dec 2013 8:20pm
Yeah go me!
Awaiting spirit of whats yet to pass
Whhhooa!
Like I'm scared..
Kick his butt too
Muhahaha
On second thoughts..
Hiding in the wardrobe
Awaiting spirit of whats yet to pass
Whhhooa!
Like I'm scared..
Kick his butt too
Muhahaha
On second thoughts..
Hiding in the wardrobe
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25th Dec 2013 9:03pm
Is that the bacchanalian ghost? That's my doppelganger...self control I haven't much :)
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Re: Extra Beats for two
25th Dec 2013 9:55pm
All but tea total
He'd be wasting his liquid amber nectar
Self control is sooo old school
He'd be wasting his liquid amber nectar
Self control is sooo old school
Re: Extra Beats for two
Anonymous
25th Dec 2013 10:32pm
Know this feeling all too well ... always present...
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25th Dec 2013 10:43pm