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ALMOST THERE
ALMOST THERE
He is so glad that he can reach at least a part of her. She has become a wonderful castle...majestic and magical and full of wonder and awe....but only from a distance. Her gates are up, and her turrets are well guarded . He has reached the gates and spoken to the keeper. He's happy to have reached this point. Because from here he can now see the fair maiden who waves to him. And he is just as excited as she is.
He is so glad that he can reach at least a part of her. She has become a wonderful castle...majestic and magical and full of wonder and awe....but only from a distance. Her gates are up, and her turrets are well guarded . He has reached the gates and spoken to the keeper. He's happy to have reached this point. Because from here he can now see the fair maiden who waves to him. And he is just as excited as she is.
Published 20th Dec 2013
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21st Dec 2013 2:19am
21st Dec 2013 11:36am
Thank you for your encouraging words. I look forward to reading your work.
