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Haiku Vlll
through night fierce winds wail
horizontal snow steals sight
white death shroud wraps all
entered in "Haiku Magic" comp.
horizontal snow steals sight
white death shroud wraps all
entered in "Haiku Magic" comp.
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Re: Haiku Vlll
19th Dec 2013 10:39pm
Angry winds stealing your vision, blinding you in the night. So gorgeously chilling...Xo
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re: Re: Haiku Vlll
20th Dec 2013 2:07am
Rain,
Your thoughtful comments always lift my spirits...and make my heart smile! Thank you so much for your visit.
I truly appreciate your friendship, and the time you take to read my poetry! Xo
Your thoughtful comments always lift my spirits...and make my heart smile! Thank you so much for your visit.
I truly appreciate your friendship, and the time you take to read my poetry! Xo
Re: Haiku Vlll
19th Dec 2013 10:50pm
re: Re: Haiku Vlll
20th Dec 2013 1:48am
Spot on, my Friend!
This is exactly the paradoxical interpretation that i was hoping to convey....the sharp contrasting concept of the hidden 'darker' aspect of snow's 'serene beauty'.
Thank you so much for your creative, poetic comment!
Always appreciated, my friend!x
This is exactly the paradoxical interpretation that i was hoping to convey....the sharp contrasting concept of the hidden 'darker' aspect of snow's 'serene beauty'.
Thank you so much for your creative, poetic comment!
Always appreciated, my friend!x
re: Re: Haiku Vlll
20th Dec 2013 1:51am
My Friend,
Your visit, and comment, have warmed my heart! Thank you ever so much!!x
Your visit, and comment, have warmed my heart! Thank you ever so much!!x
re: Re: Haiku Vlll
20th Dec 2013 1:58am
Hashman,
Thank you for bringing a bit of magic to my realm...and for your good-luck encouragement!
I always appreciate your unique comments, my Friend.x
Thank you for bringing a bit of magic to my realm...and for your good-luck encouragement!
I always appreciate your unique comments, my Friend.x
Re: Haiku Vlll
Anonymous
20th Dec 2013 2:50am
A great Haiku my friend :)
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re: Re: Haiku Vlll
20th Dec 2013 3:52am
SW, my Friend,
I thank you for taking the time to read my Haiku, and for your gracious comment!
I truly appreciate your loyal following....it gladdens my heart that you enjoy my writing!
I thank you for taking the time to read my Haiku, and for your gracious comment!
I truly appreciate your loyal following....it gladdens my heart that you enjoy my writing!
Re: Haiku Vlll
20th Dec 2013 6:26am
You have ventured far into the land of haiku! A seasoned traveller...
I have yet to visit this mystical place!
:)
I have yet to visit this mystical place!
:)
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re: Re: Haiku Vlll
20th Dec 2013 1:37pm
The journey has--and continues--to be a learning experience, mo cara!
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this piece, and for your uniquely creative comments. Appreciated--indeed!
(should you decide to venture in to this mystical realm, i am sure that you will meet many welcoming fellow travelers. :) )
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this piece, and for your uniquely creative comments. Appreciated--indeed!
(should you decide to venture in to this mystical realm, i am sure that you will meet many welcoming fellow travelers. :) )
Re: Haiku Vlll
20th Dec 2013 12:49pm
re: Re: Haiku Vlll
20th Dec 2013 1:46pm
Thank you, Magdalena, for taking the time to read my Haiku, and for your gracious comments! Both are truly appreciated!
Thanks for your visit, mo cara....you are welcome anytime! :)
Thanks for your visit, mo cara....you are welcome anytime! :)
Re. Haiku Vlll
22nd Sep 2017 2:34pm
I love how your Haikus are more traditionally Japanese than the ones I write as they include the elements, nature and or weather - this is an excellent haiku showing the dichotomy between light and dark Certainly sends chills :-)
You are really good at these :-) Much Hugginess :-)
You are really good at these :-) Much Hugginess :-)
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Re: Re. Haiku Vlll
22nd Sep 2017 3:23pm
David...your compliments bring me soul smiles, and heart-sparkles! I made an attempt at the more traditional form of Haiku, as a bit of a self-challenge---to actually discover if i had the discipline to write in this genre.While i am also fond of the more modernized form of Haiku, I am equally,very glad that my piece presented in the recognized style Thank you for the read, your thoughtful words, and your very welcomed "hugginess" ! .