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My Misfortune
Misfortune.
Hate.
There isn't much left to say.
You've left me with no choice, no path.
I should've done the math.
The beautiful blue sky turns black.
The singing birds fall dead.
My circle of serenity crumbled like bread.
I'm numb from all the lies you drilled inside my head.
Im wise but I'm dumb.
Do you see where I'm coming from?
A place where the birds don't sing and the sky doesn't glisten.
Where I have nobody to listen.
Instead of birds and the sun, I see drugs and guns.
All I want to do is run.
Published 19th Dec 2013
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19th Dec 2013 6:32pm
Wow! Dark, real and incredibly penned. Wonderful read.
Misfortune tests friends, and detects enemies.
Welcome to DUP...Xo
Misfortune tests friends, and detects enemies.
Welcome to DUP...Xo
19th Dec 2013 7:27pm
19th Dec 2013 6:33pm
The beautiful blue sky turns black.
The singing birds fall dead.
My circle of serenity crumbled like bread
Probably the best verse that I've read all day
The singing birds fall dead.
My circle of serenity crumbled like bread
Probably the best verse that I've read all day
19th Dec 2013 7:26pm
19th Dec 2013 11:50pm
Damn your poetry is really good and well written I can really relate to this because my whole life i've felt these emotions but never knew how to get rid of them and felt alone until now and I thank this website and everybody on it for that so thanks and keep writing
21st Dec 2013 3:23am
Awesomely dark. Way to express, the dark side. I really like the intensity.
21st Dec 2013 10:34pm
21st Dec 2013 10:58pm
Thank you :) You should definitely check out my other work. I'm new here!
