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He rules the Roost !!!
Two heartbeats racing together
to reach the finish line
digging into the special world
for letting their love refine.
Enveloping her with his arms and lips
And generating a fire inside
She wriggles and flutters like a helpless bird
Crossing the threshold of divine.
Floating her above the clouds
bringing short gasps of breath
Bodies collide into each other
and souls acknowledge their depth.
He commands the style
and she whispers his mind
Deliciously kissing the madness
they strive for private delight.
Releasing the love that burns beneath
And living right into the bliss
He takes her face into his palms
And leaves her musing with his last soul kiss.
to reach the finish line
digging into the special world
for letting their love refine.
Enveloping her with his arms and lips
And generating a fire inside
She wriggles and flutters like a helpless bird
Crossing the threshold of divine.
Floating her above the clouds
bringing short gasps of breath
Bodies collide into each other
and souls acknowledge their depth.
He commands the style
and she whispers his mind
Deliciously kissing the madness
they strive for private delight.
Releasing the love that burns beneath
And living right into the bliss
He takes her face into his palms
And leaves her musing with his last soul kiss.
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19th Dec 2013 11:32am
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19th Dec 2013 11:44am
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20th Dec 2013 10:11am
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Anonymous
19th Dec 2013 4:21pm
Whew! Very sexy and sensual piece. Hot! Well done! :)
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19th Dec 2013 5:28pm
Oh Brinda honey, you really pulled out your sexy pen for this one. Such beautiful sensual ink...Xo
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20th Dec 2013 10:15am
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21st Dec 2013 8:09am
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24th Dec 2013 1:09pm
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25th Dec 2013 6:32am
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24th Dec 2013 7:22pm
Echo Flowergirl. Sexy and spiritual in imagery. Favourite verse: second.
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25th Dec 2013 6:33am
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Anonymous
25th Dec 2013 10:17am
This poem not only talks about unison of two body into one soul by physical love, it also shows how to write a extreamly sexually arousing phrases without using explicits! Great job and yeah got me on :)
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26th Dec 2013 4:49am
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26th Dec 2013 8:19am
Sensually Beautifull,
you kept the grace intact, and thats a job well done.
another rat one from the master ;)
you kept the grace intact, and thats a job well done.
another rat one from the master ;)
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27th Dec 2013 5:14am
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31st Dec 2013 2:51pm
Mild heat but a big dose of romantic. Totally love the last stanza and the inclusion of "bliss".
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2nd Jan 2014 5:10am
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1st Jan 2014 11:22pm
This is a really good poem. It is nicely written like your other poems. Good job.
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2nd Jan 2014 5:11am
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14th Jan 2014 3:04pm
brought to mind an old school r and b classic, Jeffrey Osbourne's "On The Wings of Love".
My favorite line is, "Deliciously kissing the madness..."
My favorite line is, "Deliciously kissing the madness..."
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15th Jan 2014 8:22am
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15th Jan 2014 00:15am
they strive for private delight.
Releasing the love
that burns beneath
each inside...
good finale
Releasing the love
that burns beneath
each inside...
good finale
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15th Jan 2014 8:23am
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16th Jan 2014 12:28pm
Always a sucker for writes of love and lust. This ink has provided both. Strong emotional ink Ms Brinda. Thank you.
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17th Jan 2014 5:00am
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20th Jan 2014 10:34pm
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