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love, like all words, falls short
yet we dance under the confetti
with our tongues out
lusting to taste its failure
Published 18th Dec 2013
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Anonymous
18th Dec 2013 9:58pm
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19th Dec 2013 5:09pm
Anonymous
18th Dec 2013 10:04pm
This reeks of a wisdom that could surely dampen the taste for life if indulged...but, damn! I underdstand..well inked bro. Good read :-)
19th Dec 2013 5:11pm
19th Dec 2013 00:26am
19th Dec 2013 5:12pm
Doesn't matter , the words would fall short
But I feel ya. Thank you kindly
But I feel ya. Thank you kindly
19th Dec 2013 4:22am
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19th Dec 2013 5:14pm
Much appreciated Atakti... Changed one word, added another, and felt it might stand on its on
