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Sitar's And Stars
The Indian Sitar
sounds it's sliding neck
the yellow star
burns the viking deck
did I somehow
remember now
that I did know
to forget .
balancing my mind
a constant rhyme
ageless in time
to mesmorise
closing of the eyes
I visualise
colour cloud sigh's
Emerald inset .
In control
I balanced on a pole
high up from the earth
Violins in a church
waiting for the dearth
life the phoney show
sat upon the perch
if only you could know
more candle's glow
for sure .
Sitar's like stars
go up and down
musical clouds
buzz around
a cerebal recall
multiple times do fall
all big in space
is small
you dig
you retrace
your haul
this life is a race
for all
to be etched
on a floating balled
two faced
revolving wall . [/font]
sounds it's sliding neck
the yellow star
burns the viking deck
did I somehow
remember now
that I did know
to forget .
balancing my mind
a constant rhyme
ageless in time
to mesmorise
closing of the eyes
I visualise
colour cloud sigh's
Emerald inset .
In control
I balanced on a pole
high up from the earth
Violins in a church
waiting for the dearth
life the phoney show
sat upon the perch
if only you could know
more candle's glow
for sure .
Sitar's like stars
go up and down
musical clouds
buzz around
a cerebal recall
multiple times do fall
all big in space
is small
you dig
you retrace
your haul
this life is a race
for all
to be etched
on a floating balled
two faced
revolving wall . [/font]
Published 6th Feb 2011
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12th Mar 2011 10:08pm
hey thanks and I appreciate your constructiveness in comment , feel free to read more of my poems as I'm you will like some :)))
12th Aug 2011 2:23am
i like it, i am new at this; so i really can't comment much, other then say i liked it
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