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Summertime’s are beautiful
Summertime’s are beautiful
We don't need so many clothes
we can lie naked almost
enjoy the perfume of our bodies
and perfumes from near
we can smell each other my dear
we can kiss comfortably
no sweat no heat ,
we all love to daily meet
dress up
with the least
and enjoy at the drop of a hat..
You make love without fear or favor
we toil and toy all-around
we roll all over on sands and down town
we love to be around...
now so often
we have fun more than when its snows
and yes love is deep up to our nose.
You love it too;
to be in summer fever
as all of us do
we make love too...
We don't need so many clothes
we can lie naked almost
enjoy the perfume of our bodies
and perfumes from near
we can smell each other my dear
we can kiss comfortably
no sweat no heat ,
we all love to daily meet
dress up
with the least
and enjoy at the drop of a hat..
You make love without fear or favor
we toil and toy all-around
we roll all over on sands and down town
we love to be around...
now so often
we have fun more than when its snows
and yes love is deep up to our nose.
You love it too;
to be in summer fever
as all of us do
we make love too...
Published 11th Dec 2013
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Anonymous
11th Dec 2013 6:37pm
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11th Dec 2013 6:37pm
Hey, to edit a poem you have to click on Edit on the right hand side of the poem. Make the changes and then select Modify so your changes can be saved.
I hope it helped. If you need any more help with anything please don't hesitate to contact me.
It's a very sensual poem;I can almost feel the summery breeze evoked by your poem.
Also, i don't think there's a need for making the phrases bold..
I hope it helped. If you need any more help with anything please don't hesitate to contact me.
It's a very sensual poem;I can almost feel the summery breeze evoked by your poem.
Also, i don't think there's a need for making the phrases bold..
20th Aug 2018 10:52pm
again gone to read all ------ from your first to the last you not lost your touch in what you write love them all
21st Aug 2018 5:44pm
