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his wry smile...
why must you make light
of everything, she said...
leaving him completely in
the dark
Published 11th Dec 2013
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Anonymous
11th Dec 2013 4:34am
haha..bro..i envy your wit
lol I had to look at your profile to remind myself that you are from the UK..famous for English wit..:) damn I wish I could hear you speak what you write :) didn't mean to get all light headed Paul
lol I had to look at your profile to remind myself that you are from the UK..famous for English wit..:) damn I wish I could hear you speak what you write :) didn't mean to get all light headed Paul
18th Dec 2013 8:22pm
Anonymous
11th Dec 2013 5:34am
Clever and witty, you got me there Dartford :)
11th Dec 2013 4:41pm
(damn, eye heard that'n more'n a few times)
be serious!
maybe y'll be mo'loveable to her
(or
maybe knot)
be serious!
maybe y'll be mo'loveable to her
(or
maybe knot)
12th Dec 2013 7:50am
it's not because he takes her lightly,
maybe she's just annoying,
I know people like that.
Very enjoyable piece, mi dear!
Darker
maybe she's just annoying,
I know people like that.
Very enjoyable piece, mi dear!
Darker
12th Dec 2013 11:48pm
18th Dec 2013 8:25pm
A lopsidegrin's
always a bit crooked.
Then again,you wouldn't see that
in the dark :-).
Mr Witt, I love that.
always a bit crooked.
Then again,you wouldn't see that
in the dark :-).
Mr Witt, I love that.
