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Defrosting Eye's View

It's been decades
Yet, it felt like lifetime...
I can remember how she'd just
walk, walk on  by.
 
So many times luck would
play it's hand, and I'd catch a view...
 
 
Truly, heaven sent this...
this angel she was  
meant to breathe joy
inside the shell of an empty soul
 
Other girls played their poker face
poorly...
Their 'scent'  it lacked  
the essence of 'real...'
 
Though, with a garden full of flowers
A virgin gardenia, she stood out...  
Something so unique
 
Sadly, over time like rust through corrosion...
the angel's glitter gone  
and worst than that...
 
 internally her Sun,  
had settled quietly...
 
into nothingness...
Written by Poetikmind (_---_)
Published | Edited 11th Dec 2013
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