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DRINK
Bring in the wine
Green shoots on broken trees
A whispering breeze of past glories
On this river sublime.
Sing in the dusk
That brought us together
A table of friends
A shaky hand clasping yours.
Tremble words, lengthen minutes.
A wine of water born
A cask in shadows
Divining these stumbling prayers.
Oh bring the wine
Unravel trammelled rails
A constellation drawn on stars
A verse held in rhyme
When the sea
Beckons a wind in our sails
Green shoots on broken trees
A whispering breeze of past glories
On this river sublime.
Sing in the dusk
That brought us together
A table of friends
A shaky hand clasping yours.
Tremble words, lengthen minutes.
A wine of water born
A cask in shadows
Divining these stumbling prayers.
Oh bring the wine
Unravel trammelled rails
A constellation drawn on stars
A verse held in rhyme
When the sea
Beckons a wind in our sails
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2013 7:37pm
This poem is just a gem, I havent decided yet which are my favorite lines because they all seem great, really enjoyed reading your poem, hope to see more of your poetry and Welcome to DU!
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Anonymous
15th Dec 2013 11:40am
Welcome to DU! Really this write. I raise a glass to ya. :)
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17th Dec 2013 2:09am
SO NICE
a natural poet
the fountain flows
and people get wet
at the distance of the moon
they think
they are the moon
and some one will come
and take them soon
a natural poet
the fountain flows
and people get wet
at the distance of the moon
they think
they are the moon
and some one will come
and take them soon
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2nd Jan 2014 6:06pm
like u say again - the flow is always subject of the tides of the moon
Thanks again
Thanks again
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2nd Jan 2014 6:09pm