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setting fires
the calligraphy of emotion
lies elegantly upon your face
and incites fires of
perception that will
burn for nights and nights
in the presence of your glow
as it renders the phantasms
beautiful,
the green and the blue,
how they flash across
the black of glass
where my hand rests
while I watch the road
for your steps,
they might come unheard
I could miss your word
of greeting as you shake
the rain from your hair
and step to my embrace
were I not vigilant,
not aware, I may have
never known this grace.
lies elegantly upon your face
and incites fires of
perception that will
burn for nights and nights
in the presence of your glow
as it renders the phantasms
beautiful,
the green and the blue,
how they flash across
the black of glass
where my hand rests
while I watch the road
for your steps,
they might come unheard
I could miss your word
of greeting as you shake
the rain from your hair
and step to my embrace
were I not vigilant,
not aware, I may have
never known this grace.
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Re: setting fires
8th Dec 2013 7:35pm
Re: setting fires
8th Dec 2013 8:20pm
What an elegant write!
Burning and longing
for a word, an embrace
that's the essence of love.
Just wonderful!
Burning and longing
for a word, an embrace
that's the essence of love.
Just wonderful!
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8th Dec 2013 10:58pm
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8th Dec 2013 8:47pm
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8th Dec 2013 10:59pm
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9th Dec 2013 2:11am
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9th Dec 2013 12:43pm
Re: setting fires
9th Dec 2013 4:18am
Ah man, "The calligraphy of emotion lies elegantly upon your face" one of the best lines that have read here, or on any site my friend, very well done... "the green and the blue, how they flash across the black of glass where my hand rests While I watch the road for your steps" Oh man, how I Fall into this piece very easy, and can imagine the images, and the scenes, that you have created and painted in my mind, had to favorite it my friend, very well down: Eddie
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re: Re: setting fires
9th Dec 2013 12:45pm
I always love reading your comments Eddie :) I'm so glad you enjoyed this!
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