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lust after me
the muse is a harlot of art
all beauty & desire
made up like a common trollop
to lure the uneducated cave-dweller
savage that I am
she offers meat & the spices
that arouse my hunger
and I bite into her feast
like a wild animal ripping into a fresh kill
in my bed she is languor & grace
my blue nude of sentient music & sleeping songs
and I sketch her in lucent & precise strokes
bold as Caravaggio’s paintings
she seduces me with her eyes & her feminine charm
amulet of amour
and my curiosity invades her
hard & impassioned as a man’s love gun
I ravage her in my madness
I sweat & I suffer advancing retreating
till I have adorned her walls
with the rivering pearls of my essence
to prove my affection
when her screaming abates
she glows in euphoria she surrenders
she knows she is mine
and she rewards me with this –
the poetry of her soul
Published 8th Dec 2013
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8th Dec 2013 4:16pm
Amazing, I would love to see you advance your erotic poetry into something tangible, something we can press our fingers into, and smell the fluidness from the pages. I bow to your poetry graces, John, always. :)
8th Dec 2013 4:16pm
8th Dec 2013 5:07pm
Our varied muses
we should adore and worship
as long as the're with us
and serve us with their beauty.
John, you are a master of words,
your muse must be loving you much.
we should adore and worship
as long as the're with us
and serve us with their beauty.
John, you are a master of words,
your muse must be loving you much.
8th Dec 2013 6:59pm
John you are truly a gifted poet this was so beautiful in it's intensity and desire burning the pages with your erotic ink! peace Crim
Anonymous
8th Dec 2013 9:35pm
Very beautiful. The words were like a frame and your image of her/your lust were the art AND this turned me on. Just wonderful.
Anonymous
9th Dec 2013 4:32am
..and what a reward it is!
passion, lust, sensuality all over this piece!
passion, lust, sensuality all over this piece!
9th Dec 2013 1:54pm
13th Dec 2013 4:36am
....this writing is so layered....which makes it wonderful to read more than once .... :)
14th Dec 2013 5:54pm
sensually explicit... your words ca nmake even the hardest heart swoon... ;)
