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10 000 feet deep

Love at first sight feels like turning on the light.
So eager to see you smile,i thought you would always be mine.
You make me feel like im stuck 10 000 feet deep of an ocean,i don't know why but surely i will die,you are so high you can't even look at me in the eye.
10 000 feet deep you left me,suffocating,struggling,i am too deep than you can think!NOT WAVING BUT DRAWNING.
Written by lionel47
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