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Winter Light New York City
quiet streets
walking my dog
neighbors nodding "good morning"
newspapers on the stoop
wet leaves
coffee brewing
sun breaking through
cascading between buildings
perfect winter air
crisp and inviting
the day awaits you
all the promise
make it happen .....
walking my dog
neighbors nodding "good morning"
newspapers on the stoop
wet leaves
coffee brewing
sun breaking through
cascading between buildings
perfect winter air
crisp and inviting
the day awaits you
all the promise
make it happen .....
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Re: Winter Light New York City
7th Dec 2013 2:36pm
I like this piece, I've lived this piece, except walking my dog, nevertheless, I feel this piece. thank you for sharing!
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Re: Winter Light New York City
7th Dec 2013 2:48pm
thanks for your comment.
it's a special place
glad it brought back good memories
it's a special place
glad it brought back good memories
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7th Dec 2013 4:15pm
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7th Dec 2013 6:57pm
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Re. Winter Light New York City
1st Oct 2021 12:56pm
Seize the day! I love cool, crisp morning air before the cars start and the world that's officially moving for the day.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Winter Light New York City
1st Oct 2021 1:26pm
Agree
Miss my dog, saw all of that early
Thx for going back to my beginnings here
Some of my best writing i think .....
Miss my dog, saw all of that early
Thx for going back to my beginnings here
Some of my best writing i think .....
Re. Winter Light New York City
9th Mar 2023 1:50pm
I read a study that most of New York has so much human shit on the sidewalks that 90 percent of shoes have traces of fecal matter.
Hope you pick up your dog doo.
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Re: Re. Winter Light New York City
9th Mar 2023 2:07pm
Yes, of course I do. You just commented on a poem I wrote a few days ago about dog shit and fucking selfish turds who don't pick up dog crap.
Human fecal matter is a different story. I live in a pretty good nabe so dog shit is the main problem. People are overrated in most Capacities.
Thx for the read. My best poems are probably when I first started writing. Then I became jaded but funnier...
Human fecal matter is a different story. I live in a pretty good nabe so dog shit is the main problem. People are overrated in most Capacities.
Thx for the read. My best poems are probably when I first started writing. Then I became jaded but funnier...
Re: Re. Winter Light New York City
9th Mar 2023 8:36pm
Sometimes I just write titles, no poem.
Title: 10 unholy things I'd like to do to your ass that possibly involve branding equipment
Title: 10 unholy things I'd like to do to your ass that possibly involve branding equipment
Re: Re. Winter Light New York City
9th Mar 2023 9:33pm
10 unholy things I'd like to do to your ass that possibly involve branding equipment
When you’re gagged and
bent over a kneeler
like that scene in Pulp Fixtion
I’ll slide my shit covered fingers
from your crust pie hole
and rub them under your nose
so it smells like home for you
The sizzle of the brand
with my initials
smells like bacon as it
tags your right ass cheek
as my sovereign property
And I think….
I should stop and get a
bagel on the way home.
Title: there were 14 gumdrops in my peehole
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Re: Re. Winter Light New York City
Title: I'd like to spend some quality time with your Jewish pee hole ...
Re: bagel reference, rednecks don't eat bagels...
Re: bagel reference, rednecks don't eat bagels...
Re: Re. Winter Light New York City
3rd Nov 2024 00:08am
Re: bagel reference, rednecks don't eat bagels...
rednecks don't eat the bagels
they can't find the hole
without bush and
swampass
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Re. Winter Light New York City
3rd Nov 2024 2:12am
Have to admit your last comment is as close as drinking Wild Turkey 101 with Hunter S. Thompson as it gets. Rarified filth. Hard to try and one up you but I'll see you in temple and I'll be wanting some pee hole action between Torah readings....
Goddamn Betty, you need help. Let me put on my priest collar and grab the Crisco.
You need saving and ass chocolates to redeem you. Dark chocolate. Healthier..
Goddamn Betty, you need help. Let me put on my priest collar and grab the Crisco.
You need saving and ass chocolates to redeem you. Dark chocolate. Healthier..