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Rising............
(.....I really think I rise "too early"- stuff that get's a body in trouble)
Bright, dust filtered rays
creep through my window
alarm clock chirping low
into a perfectly timed crescendo
…....rising from my bed, nice and slow
a crispness in the air
as my body creeps
from beneath the sheets
a thrill begins to build
as I feel
your body's heat from beneath......
Lust is a rush.......
( ...you always find a way to draw me back
to the comfort of *our bed*....)
.....lest I rise
teasing me
from beneath the covers,
cocoa brown arms,legs and thighs
that have wrapped my body up
so many times before.....
…....I scurry back under the covers
for just a few minutes more
…...rising
(...you would too if you were
as fortunate as I
to have a beautiful someone
loving on you )
laying there beneath steamy sheets
Her skin silky, moist and brown
a shimmering mocha colored blend
heaven's floodgates opened
I feel the rain falling down.......
…..and I rise
she is my fragrant red rose
her beautiful aroma has my nose....
.....wide open
to her southern comfort.
wearing nothing
but her favorite Dallas Cowboy tee
nothing there to hinder me
from getting a seductive glimpse
of her utterly perfect anatomy....
......building on a mystery
filled with her own special blend
of suspense and intrigue
captivating me......
…...baby, how you make the sun
rise
hoping that I pressed that snooze button
because I'm about to loose myself
in some
squeezing
hugging
rubbing
touching
caressing
taking the scenic route
to other wonderful points
along her southern border
".....let's do it in the mornin'
sweet breeze in the summer time
feeling your sweet face
all laid up next to mine
sweet love in the midnight
good sleep, come mornin' light
no worries 'bout nothin'
just gettin' good love"
all up 'n heh.....
....and all points rising
Author's Note-( it's highly possible that if you didn't grow up in the early 70's, you may not know where the inspiration for this came from-not that important if you do or not. But I have pleasant memories of "Claudine", "Coolie High"-Gladys Knight and the Pips singing "Make Yours A Happy Home", "On And Off" or the Staple Singers testifying in the words of "Let's Do It Again" Let's just say my mind had a heavy dose of this, this morning with my baby. That's all I have to say about that. Enjoy )
Bright, dust filtered rays
creep through my window
alarm clock chirping low
into a perfectly timed crescendo
…....rising from my bed, nice and slow
a crispness in the air
as my body creeps
from beneath the sheets
a thrill begins to build
as I feel
your body's heat from beneath......
Lust is a rush.......
( ...you always find a way to draw me back
to the comfort of *our bed*....)
.....lest I rise
teasing me
from beneath the covers,
cocoa brown arms,legs and thighs
that have wrapped my body up
so many times before.....
…....I scurry back under the covers
for just a few minutes more
…...rising
(...you would too if you were
as fortunate as I
to have a beautiful someone
loving on you )
laying there beneath steamy sheets
Her skin silky, moist and brown
a shimmering mocha colored blend
heaven's floodgates opened
I feel the rain falling down.......
…..and I rise
she is my fragrant red rose
her beautiful aroma has my nose....
.....wide open
to her southern comfort.
wearing nothing
but her favorite Dallas Cowboy tee
nothing there to hinder me
from getting a seductive glimpse
of her utterly perfect anatomy....
......building on a mystery
filled with her own special blend
of suspense and intrigue
captivating me......
…...baby, how you make the sun
rise
hoping that I pressed that snooze button
because I'm about to loose myself
in some
squeezing
hugging
rubbing
touching
caressing
taking the scenic route
to other wonderful points
along her southern border
".....let's do it in the mornin'
sweet breeze in the summer time
feeling your sweet face
all laid up next to mine
sweet love in the midnight
good sleep, come mornin' light
no worries 'bout nothin'
just gettin' good love"
all up 'n heh.....
....and all points rising
Author's Note-( it's highly possible that if you didn't grow up in the early 70's, you may not know where the inspiration for this came from-not that important if you do or not. But I have pleasant memories of "Claudine", "Coolie High"-Gladys Knight and the Pips singing "Make Yours A Happy Home", "On And Off" or the Staple Singers testifying in the words of "Let's Do It Again" Let's just say my mind had a heavy dose of this, this morning with my baby. That's all I have to say about that. Enjoy )
Published 5th Dec 2013
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5th Dec 2013 4:16pm
5th Dec 2013 4:32pm
yes indeed Grace. invigorated, alive and so aroused. The rest of the day pales by comparison : )
Anonymous
5th Dec 2013 4:52pm
MrM,
The 70's will do that to you! LOL!!! Loving those scenic routes of southern borders! Keep on Truckin' ; )
tornado
The 70's will do that to you! LOL!!! Loving those scenic routes of southern borders! Keep on Truckin' ; )
tornado
5th Dec 2013 4:59pm
"I didn't get any sleep at all last night" (lyrics from 50's hit "Tossing and Turning") and now I can't get out of bed this morning. Might as well "Do It Again" T LOL
my growing up years, 70's and 80's.....oh what a time my friend....
Thanks for reading me : )
my growing up years, 70's and 80's.....oh what a time my friend....
Thanks for reading me : )
5th Dec 2013 8:48pm
Another great piece of art written by you hon, and I'm especially impressed that it's relatively short; considering your pen is long-winded. lol.. I love the entire piece; to select my many favorite lines...would do this poem an injustice. Damn, I heart this ink....Xoxo
Why thank you *Claudine* (have to see the movie) You'd get a laugh out of seeing James Earl Jones (voice of Darth Vader) in the buff. This poem was inspired by another great artist I didn't mention.....you : )
Your seductive ink is like fire in a deadly accurate pen. You're amongst my favorite authors, regardless of genre
Your seductive ink is like fire in a deadly accurate pen. You're amongst my favorite authors, regardless of genre
6th Dec 2013 6:56am
Rain loves to inspire you.. *does curtsey* ;) Definitely will ck out movie. Thanks luv....
5th Dec 2013 9:01pm
Amazing write Mr. M...
A spoken word Classic for sure...
with instamental notes throughout...
Your 70's lyrical blending was wonderful!
XOXO
Fire
A spoken word Classic for sure...
with instamental notes throughout...
Your 70's lyrical blending was wonderful!
XOXO
Fire
5th Dec 2013 9:28pm
Thank you pretty fenix lady......I can hear this as a spoken word thing against a 6/4 track I'm working on. Hadn't thought of that until you just "subliminally" suggested it : )
5th Dec 2013 9:07pm
Masterful piece Mr M!!!
Having grown up late 60's - 70's I feel this classic piece Bro.!!!
Outstanding write and read!!!!
Sir Lancelott
Having grown up late 60's - 70's I feel this classic piece Bro.!!!
Outstanding write and read!!!!
Sir Lancelott
5th Dec 2013 9:29pm
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9th Dec 2013 3:10am
What else can be said that have not already been done so. Like I have said many times MRM you come with that fire every time. Keep being you, doing you, and watch the world be at your feet in appreciation. Fine work of poetry my friend, very fine indeed.
21st Jan 2014 6:54pm
21st Jan 2014 7:06pm
21st Jan 2014 7:15pm
This is so Smooth, like milk chocolate melting in your mouth on a summer day
easily lost in heavenly ink. This is petty amazing.
easily lost in heavenly ink. This is petty amazing.
21st Jan 2014 7:24pm
