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Before the storm
clouds rolled in
trying desperately to
fight out the blue and
cover the hot sun
swirling
obscuring
the crepuscular light
the sky turning
varying hues of
soft orange
attempting to fill the
endless skies
etched with light
in each passing moment the clouds
were becoming more formidable
dark as smoke
lying on the edge of the
horizon, a billowing rising
blemish across the sky..
the sun round and smoldering
its light pouring through
the empty spaces
streaming in every direction
streaked with misfortune
trying desperately to
fight out the blue and
cover the hot sun
swirling
obscuring
the crepuscular light
the sky turning
varying hues of
soft orange
attempting to fill the
endless skies
etched with light
in each passing moment the clouds
were becoming more formidable
dark as smoke
lying on the edge of the
horizon, a billowing rising
blemish across the sky..
the sun round and smoldering
its light pouring through
the empty spaces
streaming in every direction
streaked with misfortune
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Re: Before the storm
Anonymous
27th Nov 2013 2:26am
Jemac this is gorgeously rich description with amazing imagery, you've penned it perfectly!
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Re: Before the storm
27th Nov 2013 7:37am
Great imagery of
mounting storm colored clouds
and a futile sun
trying to get through.
Your poem is like a
beautiful but dark painting.
mounting storm colored clouds
and a futile sun
trying to get through.
Your poem is like a
beautiful but dark painting.
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re: Re: Before the storm
27th Nov 2013 8:26pm
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27th Nov 2013 5:43pm
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Re: Before the storm
28th Nov 2013 00:31am
My last piece seem to have a similar feel to this ink, so it was very refreshing to read another poet spill about Mother Nature! Wonderful imagery jemac....Xo
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re: Re: Before the storm
28th Nov 2013 1:39am
Thank you Rain..I read yours as well...it is so nice to see, share the experiences and views!! :) ox
Re: Before the storm
2nd Dec 2013 2:31am
Your poetic imaginary is out of this world. A poetic piece deserving of high praise. Thank you for allowing me to grace this wonderful read.
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Re: Before the storm
2nd Dec 2013 8:56pm
Thank you so much ElBaby..and for your high compliments...so pleased you enjoyed! :)