Linger

thank you Mr. A I hope you mean sink in a good way.. much love Crim :)

Damn... Whew, I need some very cold air now
This burned my soul up! That Lucky bastard lol

Thank you Poe your visits are cherished.. much love Crim :)

dark , rough , raw , brutal, gruesome on one hand.. and love , lust , passion .. on the other.   I'm amazed... beautiful write..

keep rolling

cyanide.

thank you Cyanide you made me smile with your comment :) much love Crim

I hope you feel revived soon Mr. A :) much love Crim

Your words deliver an equalizing power punch, as well. The skillful tongue is to be revered and stroked in accordance, that you've achieved :)~

thank you lovely Angel for the insightful comment :) much love Crim

I like that connection: erotic poetry like good whiskey, hard to swallow but sublime in the belly. you take it like a trooper & come back for more, Crimsin...

thank John for the great review.. much love Crim :)

elegantly written dirty to the core, sweetest touches of the fist for his loving whore....Great peice

thank you for the great take on my poem :) peace Crim :)

hot write my lovely poet. you have such a stirring way with words well done.

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thank you Emo1 beautiful one for such a lovely comment :) much love Crim

Wow. You have a very seductive way with words, truly. This is a very erotic piece. Awesome!

thank you Jonathon for the great comment :) peace Crim

straight up brutality served on a platter with loving grace.

thank you Poet :) peace Crim

You give as good as you get, girl...

thank you Petit :) much love Crim

Always excellence here-Indeed linger one must with these hard hitting Colours!!!

thank you dear Soul :) much love Crim

Keep drawing your face in my mind...

thank you Cesar you visits always make me smile :) much love Crim

You never cease to amaze me with your deliverance.
Brenda, i have to say when it comes to emotional spill you are so generous with your ink, taking the reader to the core of the matter..all i can add to this is wow!!

thank you Vee making me smile wide :) much love Brenda

Brenda, there are days when I read your scribed experience and I want to push you down and use you for ME! your talent for the raw emotionally tortured stuff is so damned good it makes it seem natural to OWN you..I could feel the urge to howl over your prone form, then softly wash and preen you. Sorry if that's TMI :/

Tom thank you for the visit and generous comment :)  much love Brenda

this is sublime ink Brenda, your emotions are raw and dripping off the page but still so beautifully and sensually described. Loved this xo

thank you lovely Mia putting a smile on my face this morning :) much love Brenda

... And enough is always insufficient, and insufficient eats you out

a magnolia of metal in lace gloves, love the fist of your words

thank you for the lovely comment :) peace Crim

thank you kindly Captain.. peace Crim :)