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When she asked...I thought...(inspired by ravenn123)
*This is a continuation of sorts on a piece
asking the same question, I found inspiring
So in honor of this poet-ravenb123... I consider it our official unofficial collaboration! lol*
...What is love?
is it the unmasking
of the soul?
What is Love?
is it the need to feel
a part of a whole?
What is love?
maybe love is simple,
like silly little dreams aflight
Or it might be love is
the passions couples shared,
mornin' til night
Love is this
n' love could be that
Still it's so much more
n' that's a fact
Love I believe is a journey...
yet, it's even more
but whatever it is
Love is this thing
that you, n' I, we all
together need to deeper explore...
asking the same question, I found inspiring
So in honor of this poet-ravenb123... I consider it our official unofficial collaboration! lol*
...What is love?
is it the unmasking
of the soul?
What is Love?
is it the need to feel
a part of a whole?
What is love?
maybe love is simple,
like silly little dreams aflight
Or it might be love is
the passions couples shared,
mornin' til night
Love is this
n' love could be that
Still it's so much more
n' that's a fact
Love I believe is a journey...
yet, it's even more
but whatever it is
Love is this thing
that you, n' I, we all
together need to deeper explore...
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Re: When she asked...I thought...(inspired by ravenn123)
A beautiful journey it is Poe.. so lovingly expressed from the heart.. much love Crim :)
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re: Re: When she asked...I thought...(inspired by ravenn123)
26th Nov 2013 4:04am
Re: When she asked...I thought...(inspired by ravenn123)
Anonymous
26th Nov 2013 4:21am
I totally agree, needs to be explored :)
I like the whimsical feel of this poem with so much thought provoking lines, well penned my friend :)
I like the whimsical feel of this poem with so much thought provoking lines, well penned my friend :)

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Re: When she asked...I thought...(inspired by ravenn123)
26th Nov 2013 5:09pm
re: Re: When she asked...I thought...(inspired by ravenn123)
26th Nov 2013 5:21pm
Yes I agree, n I tried to basically ink this rhetorically
Becuz god knows I haven't a clue how to define it!
All I know, is I FEEL lol I thank you my sweet sweet Rain
Always :)
Becuz god knows I haven't a clue how to define it!
All I know, is I FEEL lol I thank you my sweet sweet Rain
Always :)
Re: When she asked...I thought...(inspired by ravenn123)
26th Nov 2013 5:57pm
re: Re: When she asked...I thought...(inspired by ravenn123)
26th Nov 2013 6:02pm
Thank you, I appreciate your thoughts n time... Will be by to read ur ink soon :)
Re: When she asked...I thought...(inspired by ravenn123)
26th Nov 2013 9:49pm
re: Re: When she asked...I thought...(inspired by ravenn123)
27th Nov 2013 1:18am
Aaaawwww thank you my friend, truly appreciate your rorss n support always... Happy u enjoyed :)
Re: When she asked...I thought...(inspired by ravenn123)
26th Nov 2013 10:12pm
As my tendency is to ask questions without suggesting my answer, I found your composition to have a quality of bravery. On top of that your language was not clouded in Ivy Tower words.
Bravo!
Bravo!
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re: Re: When she asked...I thought...(inspired by ravenn123)
27th Nov 2013 5:34am
What a gracious n generous comment bro! Thank you do much, I truly appreciate you always :)
Re: When she asked...I thought...(inspired by ravenn123)
26th Nov 2013 10:43pm
Love my friend comes and goes, for how many times have we as human beings been in love to fall out of love to try it all over again. Love your piece brother and my hats off to you for always bringing the heat.
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re: Re: When she asked...I thought...(inspired by ravenn123)
27th Nov 2013 5:40am
Thank you bro! Your always inspiring comments give me the push to keep going so I gotta try to keep bringing what I can :)