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DOES ANYONE CARE
DOES ANYONE CARE ©
Does anyone care who I am
Or am I just a sacrificial lamb
Does it have to be so painful?
Life appears to be so shameful
Deep inside my very soul
And dark as any piece of coal
My spirit is in turmoil
As it cries to meet the ground soil
Reading and writing a deluge of fighting
Singing and dancing and words need reciting
Does anyone care at all these days?
Everyone’s fucked in their head and their ways
Even the bees have gone missing they say
According to papers produced yesterday
I am who they made me good or bad
Pity me now for I am no lad
Forgiving days have long gone by
And now for revenge you seek my eye
Not blind am I no sir not yet
For in my ways I’m truly set
Does anyone care who I am
Or am I just a sacrificial lamb
Does it have to be so painful?
Life appears to be so shameful
Does anyone care who I am
Or am I just a sacrificial lamb
Does it have to be so painful?
Life appears to be so shameful
Deep inside my very soul
And dark as any piece of coal
My spirit is in turmoil
As it cries to meet the ground soil
Reading and writing a deluge of fighting
Singing and dancing and words need reciting
Does anyone care at all these days?
Everyone’s fucked in their head and their ways
Even the bees have gone missing they say
According to papers produced yesterday
I am who they made me good or bad
Pity me now for I am no lad
Forgiving days have long gone by
And now for revenge you seek my eye
Not blind am I no sir not yet
For in my ways I’m truly set
Does anyone care who I am
Or am I just a sacrificial lamb
Does it have to be so painful?
Life appears to be so shameful
Published 25th Nov 2013
| Edited 8th Dec 2013
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Anonymous
25th Nov 2013 10:30pm
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26th Nov 2013 2:17pm
Anonymous
25th Nov 2013 11:57pm
Care comes from others having first cared for yourself
Otherwise deceit
Otherwise deceit
27th Nov 2013 3:01pm
Anonymous
27th Nov 2013 9:24pm
To be honest
At this point in time I cannot as I am still grapling with taking more care of myself
You may see it as a shared idea or spontaneous thought
If it helps:
Imagine the care and attention a company or employee may show to an applicant who shows up to an interview on time and shaved clean compared to one who shows up late in pajamas smelling like a skunk...
I'd bet a clean shaven applicant would be taken seriously for having " taken care of his or her own self " perhaps even offering employment to the clean shaven applicant which may come across to this clean shaven applicant as having been cared for when it was his or her own care for them self which had them stand out
Are you mis-understanding any of this?
At this point in time I cannot as I am still grapling with taking more care of myself
You may see it as a shared idea or spontaneous thought
If it helps:
Imagine the care and attention a company or employee may show to an applicant who shows up to an interview on time and shaved clean compared to one who shows up late in pajamas smelling like a skunk...
I'd bet a clean shaven applicant would be taken seriously for having " taken care of his or her own self " perhaps even offering employment to the clean shaven applicant which may come across to this clean shaven applicant as having been cared for when it was his or her own care for them self which had them stand out
Are you mis-understanding any of this?
28th Nov 2013 9:42am
26th Nov 2013 9:19pm
I care my fellow poet. you have such a wonderful way with words. please stay and write on.
emo1
emo1
27th Nov 2013 2:58pm
11th Dec 2013 3:44am
14th Dec 2013 10:23pm
16th Dec 2013 8:52pm
Most people do not care.
But some do. And those are the ones we must cherish because they don't come by often.
There will always be someone who cares it's just a matter of when you'll find them, and I think that starts with first opening yourself up to the possibility.
But some do. And those are the ones we must cherish because they don't come by often.
There will always be someone who cares it's just a matter of when you'll find them, and I think that starts with first opening yourself up to the possibility.
