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Phantom Lover
Crimson kisses
lips of fire
tasting my core
starting at my neck
and blazing a path
to my tummy
licking bringing
out the wanton one
heady with desire
I breathe in your scent
pulsing in my tight spot
serendipitous lust
troubles the waters
undulating hips
rise to meet yours
you impale me
taking you in
I convulse
tightening around
your shaft
thrusting in and out
as I get lost in your
liquid brown eyes
hypnotizing me
taking you in my mouth
I taste my sweet scent
smelling of lilies
drinking your essence
as I give you sweet release
lost in you
I awake from this dream
creaming, pulsing
my phantom lover
who ravished me
throughout the night
lips of fire
tasting my core
starting at my neck
and blazing a path
to my tummy
licking bringing
out the wanton one
heady with desire
I breathe in your scent
pulsing in my tight spot
serendipitous lust
troubles the waters
undulating hips
rise to meet yours
you impale me
taking you in
I convulse
tightening around
your shaft
thrusting in and out
as I get lost in your
liquid brown eyes
hypnotizing me
taking you in my mouth
I taste my sweet scent
smelling of lilies
drinking your essence
as I give you sweet release
lost in you
I awake from this dream
creaming, pulsing
my phantom lover
who ravished me
throughout the night
Published 25th Nov 2013
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25th Nov 2013 4:09pm
25th Nov 2013 5:18pm
25th Nov 2013 4:20pm
OMFG!! This was hott!! Wowzers my trousers just tore lol
awesomely inked my sweet n sexy one :)
awesomely inked my sweet n sexy one :)
thank you Poe for such an awesome response making me smile wide :) much love Crim
25th Nov 2013 4:27pm
beautiful write .. very sensual...the title says a a lot .. feels like a Gothic romance, very well penned..
write on..
cyanide..
write on..
cyanide..
25th Nov 2013 5:20pm
25th Nov 2013 4:44pm
Now that's a dream I can get lost in~ sexy and pristine with lots of curve appeal, Crim ... :)
25th Nov 2013 5:21pm
Anonymous
25th Nov 2013 4:56pm
OOOH!! Crim-iny this is so Hot! it made me want to respond but my finger was so hard I couldn't hold my crayon! Then I woke up ;( steamy and creamy!
*wicked smiles*
~Tom
*wicked smiles*
~Tom
25th Nov 2013 5:22pm
25th Nov 2013 4:57pm
Wow. A lot of erotic writing on here is poorly handled. But this is truly sexy and a major turn on. Your wording was elegantly carnal. 10 out of 10 to you, milady
25th Nov 2013 5:23pm
25th Nov 2013 5:02pm
This was absolutely delectable, a wonderful mixture of heat and elegance.
25th Nov 2013 5:23pm
Anonymous
25th Nov 2013 5:28pm
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25th Nov 2013 5:39pm
25th Nov 2013 6:40pm
Such a sexy and sensual piece you've created here Crim! I love the flow of this...Xo
Pen Love~
Pen Love~
25th Nov 2013 6:56pm
26th Nov 2013 2:06am
With every poem I draw your face in my mind...and so far I can see a beautiful woman.
Once again nice inking....
Once again nice inking....
26th Nov 2013 3:40am
26th Nov 2013 3:41am
Oooh, Crim. This is one sexy beast of a write...had to step away for a minute when I read it ;)
Some great wordery here...rousing & cerebral dream, indeed.
Some great wordery here...rousing & cerebral dream, indeed.
26th Nov 2013 3:54am
Anonymous
26th Nov 2013 4:53am
A delicious read Brenda, who would want to wake up from a sensual dream such as this..:) well inked!
26th Nov 2013 9:21am
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26th Nov 2013 9:36am
I'm booking a flight on a shooting star into your next dream, & I will be taking notes. you are so juicy...
26th Nov 2013 9:41am
thank you John for such poetically beautiful comment.. smiling up at you :) much love Crim
26th Nov 2013 10:00am
26th Nov 2013 3:24pm
26th Nov 2013 9:31pm
hot hot write my dear lovely poet. you have such a wonderful way with words keep on.
emo1
emo1
26th Nov 2013 10:01pm
27th Nov 2013 00:27am
All I can say is....woohoo, lol. Great write Crim.
Nice to be back to see you again...
-MeggyMaeEye (Megs)
Nice to be back to see you again...
-MeggyMaeEye (Megs)
27th Nov 2013 10:44pm
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