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respect, display your secret tenderness toward only her petals.
love will blossom with warmth and wet
but without care and with neglect
we will wilt.
I will ache for your sunlight long after you’re gone.
respect, display your secret tenderness toward only her petals.
love will blossom with warmth and wet
but without care and with neglect
we will wilt.
I will ache for your sunlight long after you’re gone.
Published 24th Nov 2013
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24th Nov 2013 11:41pm
love the metaphor here and the way you've made the words conform to your intention. very nice1
Anonymous
6th Aug 2015 00:09am
The ending is beautiful... definitely words of tremendous love and heartache, admiration and fear. Fear of the dark...
Great work.
Great work.
