Opening the cold door

The second verse is surprisingly moving. Judging by the first I expected it to be quite bitter and terse, which I suppose it is in a way, but it's also tender. Another smasher from my favourite "panzy ass fagget"!

This is real memory capturing moment. I really enjoyed the way you combined the anger and the laughter into one. It's a rare occasion people get that lucky =] Good stuff.

i love this one who was your muse ? must have got under your skin hate it when that happens the sixth line is my favorite good luck with kicking there head off you must be tough

if you re-read it you may realise that they are two perspectives here.

sadly, you've used profanity to disguise the shallow words you have just thrown together in a minute.

Arrogance & Ego = Tosh!

Hooded

Yup, you're right, I've cut the ends off all my pens, burnt my notebooks (for the second time) I just hope you publish some more poetry quick, because otherwise I'm going to have nothing more to read apart from my own toshy ego rantings. Show me the skill I lack kid, and do it soon.

CHW,

I hope you'll agree to work on a co-write with me now.

You may be beyond any help, but that's good because that's what my therapist said about me.

regards my new friend,

Hooded

The second part is really, really good!

just the contrast I was looking for, cheers mate.