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my inner demon
when i leer into you soul i see the light
but deep inside i feel this blight
it torments me by night
and sends shivers down my spine
and baby im not really fine
im just saying that to cease your worries
because i dont want you to see,
this demon that terrorizes me
this demon i call it...
me.
but deep inside i feel this blight
it torments me by night
and sends shivers down my spine
and baby im not really fine
im just saying that to cease your worries
because i dont want you to see,
this demon that terrorizes me
this demon i call it...
me.
Published 28th Jan 2011
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28th Jan 2011 3:01am
28th Jan 2011 8:33am
its full of pain and sadness with a touch of an almost softened anger.
its relatable in many ways and its a very powerful poem. its full of beautiful lines and imagery.
you did a good job,. keep it up
its relatable in many ways and its a very powerful poem. its full of beautiful lines and imagery.
you did a good job,. keep it up
4th Feb 2011 1:28am
