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Out Of Place
I'm numb
To your world
Things go by
Before my eyes
And i feel
Lost in this place
Where nothing grows
And nothing lives
Nobody will help
Time goes by
And i'm so fucking
Out of place
Can't stay
But can't leave
Trapped in this world
Wheren nothing lives
And nothing grows
To your world
Things go by
Before my eyes
And i feel
Lost in this place
Where nothing grows
And nothing lives
Nobody will help
Time goes by
And i'm so fucking
Out of place
Can't stay
But can't leave
Trapped in this world
Wheren nothing lives
And nothing grows
Published 28th Jan 2011
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28th Jan 2011 4:11am
28th Jan 2011 8:49am
i agree with nina here. i like the meaning behind the poem. powerful stuff. i related :)
31st Jan 2011 9:16pm
I really relate to the feeling of this piece.
It comes across simply as you are the outsider, never fit in, not a part of the herd. The best poets never really fitted in.
Stunning piece, absolutely stunning!
Hooded
It comes across simply as you are the outsider, never fit in, not a part of the herd. The best poets never really fitted in.
Stunning piece, absolutely stunning!
Hooded
