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Erotic nightmare
Through the darkness of night
He searched my lips
I thought he would kiss me
But it was his dick
Which separated my lips
And filled my mouth
With his thickness and size
Suddenly slipped on my throat
And took my breath away
Meantime I heard a voice
Gaby,wake up it's a nightmare!
He searched my lips
I thought he would kiss me
But it was his dick
Which separated my lips
And filled my mouth
With his thickness and size
Suddenly slipped on my throat
And took my breath away
Meantime I heard a voice
Gaby,wake up it's a nightmare!
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Re: Erotic nightmare
18th Nov 2013 10:50pm
Strange and so erotic nightmare, Gabi! But a very short and nice ink! I love the poem! But hopefully it is only a nightmare!
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19th Nov 2013 1:52pm
Re: Erotic nightmare
18th Nov 2013 10:53pm
Who knows what lurks in the dark!! lol
Great piece sweets!!
Awesome read and write!!!
PEN On sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
Great piece sweets!!
Awesome read and write!!!
PEN On sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Erotic nightmare
19th Nov 2013 1:59pm
Ofc, i hate it!I still curious about the end,hope i will have this dream again and nobody wake me up till the end:)))Thanks for reading Tim:)
Re: Erotic nightmare
19th Nov 2013 7:25am
Damn, who woke you up ?! Let's hope you see the sequel in the next dream :)
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19th Nov 2013 2:00pm
Re: Erotic nightmare
19th Nov 2013 2:20pm
Then tell mom to sing you a lullaby, so we get to read the rest of this ultra-sensual "nightmare" hehe :D
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Re: Erotic nightmare
8th Feb 2014 8:29pm
Good one. But with me you would of woke up with dick deep up in ya. Lol! Keep up the good work.
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