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happiness from darkness
Daylight is full of darkness
A warm breeze feels chilly and cold,
Sweet dessert tastes bitter to the palate
Pastel colours look dark and bold!
All looks well from the outside
Closer inspection and you can see
A delightful happy young lady
Is broken and feeling empty.
Light sparkles at the end of the darkness
Happiness from all around
Its possible life cound be changing
Excitement, when lust can be found!
A warm breeze feels chilly and cold,
Sweet dessert tastes bitter to the palate
Pastel colours look dark and bold!
All looks well from the outside
Closer inspection and you can see
A delightful happy young lady
Is broken and feeling empty.
Light sparkles at the end of the darkness
Happiness from all around
Its possible life cound be changing
Excitement, when lust can be found!
Published 15th Nov 2013
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Anonymous
15th Nov 2013 9:18pm
donnareadl,
Nice when a four letter word can be a good thing! Enjoy the light and sparkles! ; )
tornado
Nice when a four letter word can be a good thing! Enjoy the light and sparkles! ; )
tornado
15th Nov 2013 9:29pm
16th Nov 2013 7:34am
16th Nov 2013 3:52pm
19th Nov 2013 8:58pm
This starts out reading like Smokey robinson's, "Tears Of A Clown" and takes it all the way there until the last stanza where "lust can be found" Unexpected and interesting turn.....
Impressive : )
Impressive : )
19th Nov 2013 9:36pm
