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wounded knee
Over 300 men, woman, and children killed
A child still suckling
From a dead mother breast
Killed in cold blood
They even killed their own
They still blame us
How could that be?
They disarmed us
Took everything but our spirit
A simple argument over a weapon
With a man of child-like mind
Led to an unjust slaughter
Of innocent peoples
Running for their lives
Hiding in indents in the canyon
Watching their brothers fall
Eyes open mouths gaping
Blood pooling on the
Cold frozen ground
A child still suckling
From a dead mother breast
Killed in cold blood
They even killed their own
They still blame us
How could that be?
They disarmed us
Took everything but our spirit
A simple argument over a weapon
With a man of child-like mind
Led to an unjust slaughter
Of innocent peoples
Running for their lives
Hiding in indents in the canyon
Watching their brothers fall
Eyes open mouths gaping
Blood pooling on the
Cold frozen ground
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Re: wounded knee
14th Nov 2013 8:04am
there is no retreat in your depiction. you see the tragedy w/compassionate eyes...
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re: Re: wounded knee
14th Nov 2013 2:39pm
Re: wounded knee
14th Nov 2013 12:39pm
your depiction of terrible massacra goes to the reader under skin, awesome done!
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re: Re: wounded knee
14th Nov 2013 2:40pm
Re: wounded knee
14th Nov 2013 3:33pm
I wish the Indians had been left to live in peace.. one with a the land in harmony with Mother Earth.. it's always angered me what happened.. another tragic truth written so well lovely one.. much love Crim
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re: Re: wounded knee
14th Nov 2013 4:31pm
crim
thank you for your heartfelt comment. I to wish that we were left to our own devices but then I would never know such a lovely lady like you.
emo1
thank you for your heartfelt comment. I to wish that we were left to our own devices but then I would never know such a lovely lady like you.
emo1
Re: wounded knee
Anonymous
14th Nov 2013 4:40pm
emo1,
Thank you for keeping their story and their beautiful spirits alive.
tornado
Thank you for keeping their story and their beautiful spirits alive.
tornado
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re: Re: wounded knee
14th Nov 2013 4:49pm
Re: wounded knee
17th Nov 2013 9:51am
With the title uncapitalised it took reading the responses to ascertain it was the Wounded Knee massacre (I am not American). This poem and the pic could speak for other genocidal massacres since, such as those by the Ottoman Turks on Armenians in WWI and by Nazis and their Eastern European collaborators on Jewish communities in WWII.
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re: Re: wounded knee
17th Nov 2013 8:03pm
Solomon_Song
what happened to the people in WW2 was taken from what happened to the Native Americans. Hitler took the experiences from the Native American and used it to his advantage
emo1
what happened to the people in WW2 was taken from what happened to the Native Americans. Hitler took the experiences from the Native American and used it to his advantage
emo1
Re: wounded knee
9th Jan 2014 4:09pm
re: Re: wounded knee
9th Jan 2014 5:06pm
Awakenedsoul
thank you for your comment and agree that is how it should be taught.
emo1
thank you for your comment and agree that is how it should be taught.
emo1