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Look at me
I'm very much
closer than it
seems I am in
your scream non-
scream dreams:
will you throw my heart away?
Will you make it go astray?
I'm very much
closer than it
seems I am in
your scream non-
scream dreams:
will you throw my heart away?
Will you make it go astray?
Published 12th Nov 2013
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12th Nov 2013 10:15pm
This has a creepy stalkerish feel to it, like some one creeping up behind you as they yell this poem at you :)
I dig it
I dig it
13th Nov 2013 8:56am
"Creepy." Alright. "stalkerish. Oh. Oh. I wonder. Thanks for your precise comments. Is it snowing in Detroit? It has been in Chicago for a few days.
marcella1
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