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The Void
Frozen in time
I count the paint flecks
peeling from the ceiling
so many different shades of grey
like my emotions today
depression envelopes
the masquerade I've been living
pulls me to the brink of insanity
where I fall to the floor
crashing there incapacitated
tearing, clawing my way back up
lest I lie there and lose myself in the dark
where vampiric teeth slice into me
drinking off my despair
drifting in the abyss
of my own demise
I hear voices, cackling with laughter
echoing coldly off the walls
the void wraps it's
claw like fingers
deep into my flesh
learn something Crimsin
I hear somewhere in the distance
past mistakes, presently damned
turn the page before it's too late
(Written while listening to Evanescence Bring me to life)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wXcdYBh3hgg
I count the paint flecks
peeling from the ceiling
so many different shades of grey
like my emotions today
depression envelopes
the masquerade I've been living
pulls me to the brink of insanity
where I fall to the floor
crashing there incapacitated
tearing, clawing my way back up
lest I lie there and lose myself in the dark
where vampiric teeth slice into me
drinking off my despair
drifting in the abyss
of my own demise
I hear voices, cackling with laughter
echoing coldly off the walls
the void wraps it's
claw like fingers
deep into my flesh
learn something Crimsin
I hear somewhere in the distance
past mistakes, presently damned
turn the page before it's too late
(Written while listening to Evanescence Bring me to life)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wXcdYBh3hgg
Published 11th Nov 2013
| Edited 12th Nov 2013
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11th Nov 2013 5:40pm
concise, emotional and dark perfection. it is cool how other mediums of art can inspire so well.
thank you DY yes the music saying how I felt inspired these emotions.. thank you again.. peace Crim :)
11th Nov 2013 5:42pm
Hauntingly beautiful. a very intriguing piece of yours, to say the least, crim. Wonderful write.
11th Nov 2013 6:06pm
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11th Nov 2013 6:54pm
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11th Nov 2013 11:59pm
11th Nov 2013 6:56pm
It seems like life is a series of wake up calls.....and we are on the edge of consciousness....
12th Nov 2013 00:02am
11th Nov 2013 11:26pm
Dark indeed Dear Crim...Evanescence is good for that too :) Excellent Ink!!!
12th Nov 2013 00:02am
11th Nov 2013 11:43pm
I'm with you lying there looking up at the ceiling...great feeling in your words :)
12th Nov 2013 00:03am
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Anonymous
12th Nov 2013 3:15am
Love the message Crim! dark becomes inspirational ..learn something! come out of the darkness with the light of tomorrow.
Great ink!
Great ink!
thank you :) you made me smile with your comment.. inspiring to make more of an effort.. peace Crim
12th Nov 2013 3:33am
It's amazing how you created this wonderful read by using the ceiling as your focal point,letting your thoughts transform into beautiful ink! I love how you captured the void so intensely. Love this Crim...Xo
12th Nov 2013 3:43am
it was a combination of the music and the paint chips that inspired this poem.. gave me some realizations.. thank you sweet Rain.. for getting my poem.. much love Crim :)
16th Nov 2013 1:14pm
