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Today, my love whispered to me...
Today, my love whispered to me sensual words
I become shy, drowning in its deep records
And my tender heart beat even harder
while my face blushed youthfully younger
Shhh, my love, I love you so much
Shhh, words aren't needed for touch
Today, my love whispered to me sultry words
I was thrilled, flying high in its wet records
while my soul fluttered away silken butterflied
My heart drummed joyful tears of her magnified
Shhh, my love, I love you so much
Shhh, words aren't needed for touch
Today, my love whispered to me eternal words
I was happy feeling her pure devotion of records
my skin a canvas for her divine touch of dove
While all my body warms itself with her love
Shhh, my love, I love you so much
Shhh, words aren't needed for touch
Ballad in competition for "best ballad"
Magic Vee helps me to write in correct English language
Published 8th Nov 2013
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Anonymous
8th Nov 2013 4:15am
Lovely poem. This line, in particular was quite beautifully written:
"while my soul fluttered away silken butterflied "
"while my soul fluttered away silken butterflied "
8th Nov 2013 7:15am
Anonymous
8th Nov 2013 4:16am
Beautiful timeless ballad, you had a beautiful idea Malin and hope you win, it deserves it.
8th Nov 2013 7:16am
8th Nov 2013 4:33am
8th Nov 2013 7:26am
Oh, thank you, I knew the poetry was able to transmit feelings at such a level to give chills. And I am able to do that! Incredible.
8th Nov 2013 6:07am
What can I say this poem is breathtakingly beautiful and it touched me on a very deep level..... :)
8th Nov 2013 7:34am
Please, don't forget to breathe again!
I use the joke for hiding my confusion in front of those messages, thank you so much!
I use the joke for hiding my confusion in front of those messages, thank you so much!
8th Nov 2013 11:47am
8th Nov 2013 11:48am
