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You
You knew
head over heels
I fell alone
you took advantage
"I just realized
it was you all along
I'm in love with you"
Now
the tables had turn
Watch me leave
with my deuces up
head over heels
I fell alone
you took advantage
"I just realized
it was you all along
I'm in love with you"
Now
the tables had turn
Watch me leave
with my deuces up
Published 7th Nov 2013
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7th Nov 2013 9:17pm
I thoroughly enjoyed this!
I know the feeling from the first stanza all too well. Very nice write!
write on!
I know the feeling from the first stanza all too well. Very nice write!
write on!
7th Nov 2013 9:24pm
8th Nov 2013 5:59pm
Your first attempt is a Great one sweets!!!
WELCOME TO THE D U!!!!
Looking forward too reading more!!
Sir Lancelott
WELCOME TO THE D U!!!!
Looking forward too reading more!!
Sir Lancelott
8th Nov 2013 6:07pm
20th Nov 2013 5:20pm
20th Nov 2013 5:22pm
Thank you :) lol yeah it was my first attempt... :) i'm glad you liked it :)
20th Nov 2013 5:48pm
20th Nov 2013 5:52pm
Thanks... I posted another one but it is not as good lol... Give it a read :)
