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abuser
how bleak & gothic are my fantasies
how strict
my chair is straight-backed, puritanical.
you will come to me naked,
full of shame, wicked girl
drape yourself across my knees
your hands touching the floor
your legs florid & trembling
in precarious air
your ass at my command
pristine & glorious, worthy of severe punishment.
my hand glides, to tease you
then rises, & descends brutally!
you utter your first moan, your tears welling
your pallid buttocks quickly become cerise
under my discipline.
your journey of pain has begun,
and my perforated paddle hastens us further
into the sweetest terror
to find the limit of your endurance
and the boundary of my dementia
when your torment is excruciating
you will shout the safe word
and repeat it
praying to heaven that I will capitulate…
when I release you,
lie on the bed, on your belly,
that I may savor the reward of my labor
I will sate my vicious hunger
by my own hand.
I don’t want to touch you
I don’t want sex with you
because you are a dream
and you will only
ever be a dream…
Published 5th Nov 2013
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5th Nov 2013 9:15pm
oh john
i mean oh john!!
i can say no more
just..
what's the safe word again?
i forget easy
XD
i mean oh john!!
i can say no more
just..
what's the safe word again?
i forget easy
XD
6th Nov 2013 1:38am
Anonymous
6th Nov 2013 5:06am
Uhnnnnnn... felt this one...
6th Nov 2013 2:28pm
The fifth stanza is a serious climax... Feeling the sting with this one, John
6th Nov 2013 5:09pm
Anonymous
6th Nov 2013 8:47pm
JohnFeddeler
A dream is only a dream, but you have assigned it blood and boundaries……and sweet red swollen skin that we might taste that dream. Enjoyed!
tornado
A dream is only a dream, but you have assigned it blood and boundaries……and sweet red swollen skin that we might taste that dream. Enjoyed!
tornado
6th Nov 2013 8:50pm
John I enjoyed this scenario of discipline arousing me with your dream.. sensual inking.. peace Crim
You're quite good for surprises.
Liked this much and had
the scenery right
before my very eyes.
Enjoyed!
Liked this much and had
the scenery right
before my very eyes.
Enjoyed!
7th Nov 2013 6:13am
ahh... i think the only utterance of this safe word shall me uttered under my breath... ;)
9th Nov 2013 10:16am
19th Nov 2013 00:05am
crawling around in the nether world
straight up
raw
unashamed
doling out the punishment
and savoring it
Yes and it counts .....
straight up
raw
unashamed
doling out the punishment
and savoring it
Yes and it counts .....
