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You should have let it be
Between the corner where the pretty girl smokes
and a tired bus drags it's sides
was an empty shop
sign turned to closed
flipping the bird to the gleam beneath the grime
but gaps in dusty shelves wouldn't believe it
their circles still holding a place for tins
long rusted
rat chewed
and gone
still enough rust on the hinges to support the memories
of the good 'ol days
when East end mods snuck lunch into leather pockets
between the riots
but like the boots and backs of those mods
The signs too old to stay stiff
and ward off the weight of the brave new world any longer
now it flaps in the breeze sometimes
and the coffee tastes bittersweet
like memories of youth misspent
even the best of them
gotta bow their heads some time
and a tired bus drags it's sides
was an empty shop
sign turned to closed
flipping the bird to the gleam beneath the grime
but gaps in dusty shelves wouldn't believe it
their circles still holding a place for tins
long rusted
rat chewed
and gone
still enough rust on the hinges to support the memories
of the good 'ol days
when East end mods snuck lunch into leather pockets
between the riots
but like the boots and backs of those mods
The signs too old to stay stiff
and ward off the weight of the brave new world any longer
now it flaps in the breeze sometimes
and the coffee tastes bittersweet
like memories of youth misspent
even the best of them
gotta bow their heads some time
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Re: You should have let it be
3rd Nov 2013 2:32am
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3rd Nov 2013 2:34am
Re: You should have let it be
3rd Nov 2013 2:33am
These trendy bastards won't rest until every drop of character has been leached from the world.
Re: You should have let it be
3rd Nov 2013 2:58am
"still enough rust on the hinges to support the memories
of the good 'ol days"
I love that.
empty and melancholy-just how I like it.
of the good 'ol days"
I love that.
empty and melancholy-just how I like it.
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re: Re: You should have let it be
3rd Nov 2013 3:43am
Re: You should have let it be
3rd Nov 2013 3:11am
This is true art.. sad in tone with brilliant metaphors.. hitting me in the heart.. fitting for the mood i'm in a real masterpiece.. i'm so grateful you're here.. peace Crim
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re: Re: You should have let it be
3rd Nov 2013 3:45am
Thank you very much.
Signs too old to stay stiff
Might get me into trouble yet lol
Signs too old to stay stiff
Might get me into trouble yet lol
Re: You should have let it be
3rd Nov 2013 3:16am
can't halt progress. it speeds by us daily, splashes mud on our boots...
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re: Re: You should have let it be
3rd Nov 2013 3:51am
I know, I know. Djokovic beat you, doesn't mean your gonna quit tennis though does it. We don't have to like it though.
Thanks for stopping by mate, appreciate it.
Thanks for stopping by mate, appreciate it.
Re: You should have let it be
3rd Nov 2013 3:51am
re: Re: You should have let it be
3rd Nov 2013 4:21am
Re: You should have let it be
3rd Nov 2013 11:44am
re: Re: You should have let it be
5th Nov 2013 4:50am
Thank you, Russian super spy. This message will self destruct in 10 minutes.
Just blend in with people again.
Just blend in with people again.
Re: You should have let it be
3rd Nov 2013 3:01pm
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5th Nov 2013 4:52am