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Sanctum
You breached my defences
My lame attempt at obstructing failed
Like the tide you eventually flowed in
Breezed past as I expected the worst
Expecting a few choice words, nothing
you said nothing, but the kiss on my forehead
And the hand on my cheek, swift as it was
Spoke for you, told me it would be ok
we would be ok.
As for my inner sanctum being pawed over
You didn't look as you left soon after
I think you already knew what to expect
Waiting your return
My turn to arrive
To step into yours too
And pay the same compliment
My lame attempt at obstructing failed
Like the tide you eventually flowed in
Breezed past as I expected the worst
Expecting a few choice words, nothing
you said nothing, but the kiss on my forehead
And the hand on my cheek, swift as it was
Spoke for you, told me it would be ok
we would be ok.
As for my inner sanctum being pawed over
You didn't look as you left soon after
I think you already knew what to expect
Waiting your return
My turn to arrive
To step into yours too
And pay the same compliment
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Re: Sanctum
Anonymous
30th Oct 2013 6:51am
And oh isn't it wonderful to know that that acceptance is there ...
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re: Re: Sanctum
30th Oct 2013 7:04am
Yes agreed petit
We all have our hidden away places
Nice to think if discovered that
It'll be ok
That they would be ok
I need to find someone like that hehe
We all have our hidden away places
Nice to think if discovered that
It'll be ok
That they would be ok
I need to find someone like that hehe
Re: Sanctum
30th Oct 2013 7:16am
Kinda erotic, I.must say " As for my inner sanctum being pawed over ", at least. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Powerful, brief poem.
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30th Oct 2013 7:22am
Re: Sanctum
30th Oct 2013 1:33pm
The voyeur side of me loved this, miss. Just knowing she(you?) plays alone sometimes, is more than erotic.
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re: Re: Sanctum
30th Oct 2013 2:53pm
hehe Mr Hawk
i do believe you read something different in this poetry piece xD
and thats a good thing too :)
it was actually about my inner sanctum where my soul rests, not many get past my defences, maybe just one :)
i do believe you read something different in this poetry piece xD
and thats a good thing too :)
it was actually about my inner sanctum where my soul rests, not many get past my defences, maybe just one :)
re: Re: Sanctum
30th Oct 2013 2:54pm
and yes Mr Hawk maybe I do play solo once in awhile too hehe, just so you know..
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Re: Sanctum
31st Oct 2013 00:19am
I finally find a poem
that doesn't make me
blush,
and then I read the
comments
and here I go again..:)
that doesn't make me
blush,
and then I read the
comments
and here I go again..:)
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31st Oct 2013 5:40am