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Does he even take timeout,
taking the time to ponder over
what it is he's actually doing,
a snippet of information here or there,
his mind reliving distant acquaintances
grasping coincidences, holding on
reassuring himself its ok to do so,
to make sure its what he wants.
Did he even consider that maybe, just
maybe it wasn't so mirrored as his active
over active mind led him to believe.
his head speaks of waiting a little longer
his heart screwed with regrets if he walks
so he stays.
**My take on obsessive people
there's a fine line in affection and obsession
taking the time to ponder over
what it is he's actually doing,
a snippet of information here or there,
his mind reliving distant acquaintances
grasping coincidences, holding on
reassuring himself its ok to do so,
to make sure its what he wants.
Did he even consider that maybe, just
maybe it wasn't so mirrored as his active
over active mind led him to believe.
his head speaks of waiting a little longer
his heart screwed with regrets if he walks
so he stays.
**My take on obsessive people
there's a fine line in affection and obsession
Published 29th Oct 2013
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29th Oct 2013 4:25pm
Are you twalking ta me? I got yer obsession right here :D I like this one...although, did ya have to hold the mirror so close?
29th Oct 2013 4:53pm
29th Oct 2013 4:53pm
Anonymous
29th Oct 2013 7:08pm
Have to agree ... breathing room is required to keep any relationship from suffocating.
29th Oct 2013 7:20pm
Yes agreed petit
Everyone deserves to have their own
Space
Its the building blocks for a wonderful relationship
No space= no relationship becomes restrictive
Its a fine balance to achieve
Too much/too little
Its about finding a happy ground where both are comfortable
About being happy is everything
Everyone deserves to have their own
Space
Its the building blocks for a wonderful relationship
No space= no relationship becomes restrictive
Its a fine balance to achieve
Too much/too little
Its about finding a happy ground where both are comfortable
About being happy is everything
29th Oct 2013 8:52pm
I am not going to lie to you...I have been there...I have been there. Thank you for writing this...it's purifying. Obsession is like an infection: one must drain the poisonous pus, squeeze until it's gone, no matter how much it hurts. Sorry for that utterly disgusting analogy, Rose, but it is like an infection. I'd like to think it happens to the best & the worst of us. Lessons learned, but I still need a reminder from time to time. You make my heart think. Thank you.
29th Oct 2013 10:17pm
As I said Bs a fine line between affection and obsession
Prefer affection but understand the ways of obsession
And have sympathy for those caught within its grasp
Wonderful commenting thankyou
Prefer affection but understand the ways of obsession
And have sympathy for those caught within its grasp
Wonderful commenting thankyou
Anonymous
29th Oct 2013 11:32pm
Totally relatable, i was at the receiving end of obsessive relationship and its not a fun place to be, so suffocating.
30th Oct 2013 5:48am
