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You Can Wake Up Now
You have pretended to drown in my arms
Saying my embrace was like the sea
But I'd say it was morphine cloud
From the way your jaw fell slack
And your heart slowed to an obvious white.
Saying my embrace was like the sea
But I'd say it was morphine cloud
From the way your jaw fell slack
And your heart slowed to an obvious white.
Published 21st Jan 2011
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23rd Jan 2011 7:51pm
I love the distance in this...it's like something's a bit off beat, which gives you a great unsettling feeling. Do you write prose? I never got prose writing, but I bet yours is brilliant, if you do write it.
25th Jan 2011 11:48pm
i had to write stories for school.. two of them were alright. if i write prose willing ly its a prose poem haha
26th Jan 2011 3:11am
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