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Cheers
Questioning everything
as I drink my liquor
while smoking a cigarette
is it real if it's not
bare knuckles
ass to the wall?
i'm going ten rounds
with a monster
who knows MMA
knows all the dirty tricks
fighting it out and losing
getting punched in the skull
as I duck and dive
everyday I get up
say i'm not going to drink
fail, fail, fail
no tears come fuck that shit
too much water under the bridge
to start crying now
I want to be a fighter
of the finest order
not needing alcohol
to chase away the ugly
that comes knocking daily
until then cheers.
as I drink my liquor
while smoking a cigarette
is it real if it's not
bare knuckles
ass to the wall?
i'm going ten rounds
with a monster
who knows MMA
knows all the dirty tricks
fighting it out and losing
getting punched in the skull
as I duck and dive
everyday I get up
say i'm not going to drink
fail, fail, fail
no tears come fuck that shit
too much water under the bridge
to start crying now
I want to be a fighter
of the finest order
not needing alcohol
to chase away the ugly
that comes knocking daily
until then cheers.
Published 28th Oct 2013
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Anonymous
28th Oct 2013 8:50pm
Crim,
Love the rough and tumble start and then the light hearted end! Bottoms up! ; )
tornado
Love the rough and tumble start and then the light hearted end! Bottoms up! ; )
tornado
28th Oct 2013 9:20pm
28th Oct 2013 9:00pm
*raises glass* Cheers for now....
We can work Life out later.... :)
Love it, Crim...Xo
We can work Life out later.... :)
Love it, Crim...Xo
28th Oct 2013 9:20pm
28th Oct 2013 9:14pm
Cheers-sometimes you just gotta get away somehow-excellence Dear Crim!!!
28th Oct 2013 9:21pm
28th Oct 2013 9:38pm
Cheers Brenda.. sometimes you just gotta take some liquid courage to find your stride and face the music
Your right Koutniss.. I've been drinking and trying to avoid some things.. thank you beautiful lady you made my week with your add.. much love Brenda :)
28th Oct 2013 10:42pm
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29th Oct 2013 3:01am
I'm trying to fight it Vee but failing so far but i'll keep trying thank you lovely one.. peace Brenda
Anonymous
29th Oct 2013 1:26am
I know you don't know my history... but believe me - I do understand. And I know that one day you will find the reason to stop. And you have the strength of will to do that when the time comes.
I have faith in you...
I have faith in you...
29th Oct 2013 3:03am
thank you for having faith in me and for understanding beautiful lady :) peace Brenda
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