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Queen of Nothing
As my life spirals down
you frown
for you loved me
far too much
Around you i wore a crown
but now it lays on the ground
you frown
for you loved me
far too much
Around you i wore a crown
but now it lays on the ground
Published 20th Jan 2011
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20th Jan 2011 1:06pm
the first stanza is just magnificent. feel that the second stanza it's not needed
21st Jan 2011 1:15am
if you knew my ex boyfriend you would know why i wrote the second one but i understand form your prospective..thank you
22nd Jan 2011 7:18am
i like how your poems are small but filling. like full meals in pill form. like in the future... buut umm yea great poem
22nd Jan 2011 10:10pm
22nd Jan 2011 11:13pm
you should write another one where you get your crown back because of you two being in the relationship you r in now.....just thinking out loud
22nd Jan 2011 11:16pm
that would make sense...the fact that we are friends now..even after all that happened between us..i think i might..thanks for the idea wife
