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Expressions of Terror
No one can take what I have earned
Had Jesus whipped until He learned
Preeminence was mine alone
I ruled supreme on heaven's throne
I gave power to ancient Rome
Made Nero's reign feel right at home
Christians slaughtered and forced to fight
I watched them die with such delight
I slashed the throats of prostitutes
And carved them up beside my boots
The female trash of London's poor
Won't need their organs anymore
For years I was at Hitler's side
While soldiers marched for Nazi pride
I murdered Jews of every age
When swastikas brought fear and rage
I burned crosses behind a hood
Tied nooses tight where life once stood
I bombed churches on Christmas Eve
All for the God that I believe
My only shot tore through King's head
The hope for change profusely bled
His dream of peace I turned to hate
I lead riots to celebrate
I butchered pigs to start a war
Repeatedly I stabbed some more
As Sharon Tate screamed for her life
Her baby's blood dripped from my knife
I poured the drinks to quench their thirst
My flock lined up with children first
A new Eden Jonestown would be
Sheep so eager to follow me
I flew the planes straight into hell
I laughed with glee as bodies fell
The desperate cried engulfed in dust
Those wretched fools in God they trust
Virginia Tech I took in style
Shooting students with a smile
I gunned them down like worthless scum
Retribution has more to come
More suffering I will inflict
On human beings that sin has picked
Throughout the world are souls to take
Mankind will pay for God's mistake
Originally written for the "Oh My Angel" Competition.
Had Jesus whipped until He learned
Preeminence was mine alone
I ruled supreme on heaven's throne
I gave power to ancient Rome
Made Nero's reign feel right at home
Christians slaughtered and forced to fight
I watched them die with such delight
I slashed the throats of prostitutes
And carved them up beside my boots
The female trash of London's poor
Won't need their organs anymore
For years I was at Hitler's side
While soldiers marched for Nazi pride
I murdered Jews of every age
When swastikas brought fear and rage
I burned crosses behind a hood
Tied nooses tight where life once stood
I bombed churches on Christmas Eve
All for the God that I believe
My only shot tore through King's head
The hope for change profusely bled
His dream of peace I turned to hate
I lead riots to celebrate
I butchered pigs to start a war
Repeatedly I stabbed some more
As Sharon Tate screamed for her life
Her baby's blood dripped from my knife
I poured the drinks to quench their thirst
My flock lined up with children first
A new Eden Jonestown would be
Sheep so eager to follow me
I flew the planes straight into hell
I laughed with glee as bodies fell
The desperate cried engulfed in dust
Those wretched fools in God they trust
Virginia Tech I took in style
Shooting students with a smile
I gunned them down like worthless scum
Retribution has more to come
More suffering I will inflict
On human beings that sin has picked
Throughout the world are souls to take
Mankind will pay for God's mistake
Originally written for the "Oh My Angel" Competition.
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Re: Expressions of Terror
26th Oct 2013 2:47am
"pleased to meet you, hope you guess my name ..."
Sad that all that happened, but very well written!
Sad that all that happened, but very well written!
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Anonymous
26th Oct 2013 6:12am
I am so glad you wrote. I love your work. When I first joined a wrote you a few PMs regarding questions. You were very welcoming. But it is nice to see your dark side, no pun intended. I love the many examples you use. The reader really feels your words and the relishes in the mood and the rhyme scheme. Well done.
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Re: Expressions of Terror
26th Oct 2013 7:22am
The epitome of blunt" terror expressions" and a paradigm of good writing skills here at DU; displayed so well with this exceptional poem. Your poems are always a pleasure for me to read. Congratulations MC!
- Jake
- Jake
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Anonymous
29th Oct 2013 8:59pm
Ugh, an awful time in history.
Well written poem :)
Well written poem :)
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Re: Expressions of Terror
29th Oct 2013 9:13pm
This is a mean joint. I say that in a good way..
LIKE THIS POEM IS BAD ASS REAL TALK..
LIKE THIS POEM IS BAD ASS REAL TALK..
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31st Oct 2013 4:02pm
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Re: Expressions of Terror
6th Nov 2013 6:57am
Only you could make such aweful things sound so beautiful, I love it! Its the "Devils" anthem. Beautifully written.
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7th Nov 2013 12:57pm
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Re: Expressions of Terror
30th Nov 2013 8:17am
You expertly held a mirror showing the dark reflections in a sad black world. While tragic, the work shows wit, empathy, and had effective rhyme ans structure. Well done!
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Re: Expressions of Terror
3rd Dec 2013 10:20am
Isn't the real mistake for man to think he is not part of nature and all of it's cruelties?
Wonderful write!
Wonderful write!
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Anonymous
3rd Dec 2013 12:56pm
rings like sympathy for the devil but gritty realistic in your face, actually interesting and more powerful and although it will never have quite the funk it makes for a good read
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Re: Expressions of Terror
7th Dec 2013 9:38am
All I can say is holy shit this is a bad ass poem outstanding brilliant write. Can't wait to catch up and read some more of your work.
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30th Dec 2013 3:19pm
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Re: Expressions of Terror
8th Feb 2014 2:02pm
Are you sure you haven't published a book or took writing
class? Your writings are amazing
class? Your writings are amazing
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Re: Expressions of Terror
14th Feb 2014 5:27am
Lovely write.
touched my heart,
hopefully my poems are as good as this materpiece.
xoxo
touched my heart,
hopefully my poems are as good as this materpiece.
xoxo
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15th Feb 2014 2:37am
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27th Feb 2014 2:52pm
A real angel of terrible darkness. I liked this, the flow appears effortless which means there is high skill at work here.
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25th Apr 2014 10:37pm
As I was reading it I had the image od Satan in my mind. This is dark. Enjoyed it.
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Re: Expressions of Terror
17th May 2015 9:27pm
I loved the poem itself, but watching the video, it opened a door in my mind... kinda warped and twisted my brain a bit... I love it!
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6th Nov 2016 5:00am
Re. Expressions of Terror
15th Feb 2018 12:56pm
You published this originally on my 24th birthday.
well penned.
spanning decades of terror
flickering as time jumps to the next atrocity.
excellent writing Mourningcloak.
well penned.
spanning decades of terror
flickering as time jumps to the next atrocity.
excellent writing Mourningcloak.
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20th May 2018 4:32am
Re. Expressions of Terror
Anonymous
24th Jun 2019 2:32am
Certainly a different cut! A thought provoking, dark piece such as this is needed now and then...you've reminded the reader of certain realities in a unique, compelling way.
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