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Raindrop Smiles
We walk along the promenade
While bluebirds sing a serenade
Dandelions blow in the air
Each one a wish for us to share
Weeping Willows sway on parade
Draping branches softly cascade
The sun fades gray as shadows die
Claps of thunder excite the sky
A kissing bridge arches a stream
Where kisses hold a special dream
Two lovers pause to feel the breeze
A gentle touch begs pretty please
Affections fill the hours spent
In pouring rain with lilac scent
Sweet cracks in time pull lightning through
Illuminates a breathless view
Deep puddles flood the cobblestone
Amid the ripples we lie alone
Squishy motions intensely warm
Immersed inside our private storm
Fields of tulips invite us in
Sodden petals stick to our skin
Slippery bodies tightly embrace
Our hands caress each other's face
Off daffodils rain slowly drips
A single plash against your lips
Pink hummingbirds drink from your hair
The taste of you swirls everywhere
Drenched together on love we feed
To satiate our longing need
Entwined we slide down luscious springs
Enjoying all that pleasure brings
Rainbows giggle and pirouette
Around the clouds still dripping wet
Reflections drift over the lake
Soon early dusk is ours to take
The night explodes with fireflies
Small blinking stars light up your eyes
Thin moonbeams shine in silken glass
Clear droplets bead on crystal grass
Here in my arms where you belong
As crickets play our favorite song
Tomorrow is so far away
At least for now we have today
While bluebirds sing a serenade
Dandelions blow in the air
Each one a wish for us to share
Weeping Willows sway on parade
Draping branches softly cascade
The sun fades gray as shadows die
Claps of thunder excite the sky
A kissing bridge arches a stream
Where kisses hold a special dream
Two lovers pause to feel the breeze
A gentle touch begs pretty please
Affections fill the hours spent
In pouring rain with lilac scent
Sweet cracks in time pull lightning through
Illuminates a breathless view
Deep puddles flood the cobblestone
Amid the ripples we lie alone
Squishy motions intensely warm
Immersed inside our private storm
Fields of tulips invite us in
Sodden petals stick to our skin
Slippery bodies tightly embrace
Our hands caress each other's face
Off daffodils rain slowly drips
A single plash against your lips
Pink hummingbirds drink from your hair
The taste of you swirls everywhere
Drenched together on love we feed
To satiate our longing need
Entwined we slide down luscious springs
Enjoying all that pleasure brings
Rainbows giggle and pirouette
Around the clouds still dripping wet
Reflections drift over the lake
Soon early dusk is ours to take
The night explodes with fireflies
Small blinking stars light up your eyes
Thin moonbeams shine in silken glass
Clear droplets bead on crystal grass
Here in my arms where you belong
As crickets play our favorite song
Tomorrow is so far away
At least for now we have today
Published 17th Mar 2014
| Edited 4th Apr 2014
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Anonymous
17th Mar 2014 11:25pm
Truly, a heartfelt and magnificent ink. I am in awe of your talent and rhythm, well done.
17th Mar 2014 11:41pm
18th Mar 2014 00:40am
Fantastic visuals. Whoever this is written for will be more than honored. Beautiful! Enjoyed much. :)
18th Mar 2014 2:51am
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18th Mar 2014 9:04am
Another amazing poem, as yours always are. I love how it dances off the tongue and the scene that played with the dance of words that you've composed. Its great to see another poem from you, it's been a while.. Thank you for sharing it
18th Mar 2014 5:48pm
What a beautifully written and heartfelt tale. I absolutely loved it. Thank you for giving us all the opportunity to read such beauteous words.
18th Mar 2014 8:47pm
This remembrance of tenderness - feels like an intriguing change of direction morning cloak
A cool statement
A cool statement
19th Mar 2014 3:22am
26th Mar 2014 4:22pm
How very lovely and what images this one evokes. You must have been in love deeply...or if you're lucky, are deeply in love right now. Thank you.
14th Jun 2014 1:36pm
What beautiful tale that pulls one along and into it with a smiling feeling inside that make one feel good on the outside. so inspirational and I apologise to you for not reading sooner, I loved it,
Thank you for sharing this beauty with all of us here, :)
Thank you for sharing this beauty with all of us here, :)
23rd Jun 2014 4:17pm
I love Weeping Willows <3
I like how you portrayed the rainbows, childish almost. :)
"Tomorrow is so far away
At least for now we have today"
The last two lines are perfect, lovely poetry.
I like how you portrayed the rainbows, childish almost. :)
"Tomorrow is so far away
At least for now we have today"
The last two lines are perfect, lovely poetry.
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Anonymous
28th Jan 2015 1:14am
Absolutely delicious. Brilliantly done.
2nd Jun 2015 11:03pm
Must confess that I love your descriptiveness, it lends me things to see & feel. Personally like gulps of airs that are needed
30th Aug 2016 9:12am
This is perfect in my opinion. Skill,craft.talent mixed so very well..amazing amazing ink!
19th Mar 2017 00:51am
You are very good with your words in your poems. Don't ever think otherwise. :)
Anonymous
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2nd Sep 2017 10:47pm
I just came across this while browsing. It's been so long since I've read you and how great to find you are also making audios and videos. (when I closed my account a few years ago, I also unfollowed everyone, hence I've not read you)
Wonderful stuff.
Wonderful stuff.
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16th Dec 2019 6:14am
Very snazzy style! This poem, regardless of it’s powerful content, is a delight to read... well i love to write as well so please check my site poemtheart i hope you like it, thank you :)
15th Jan 2020 3:59pm
You are a great writer... I mean, excellent! Why do you not publish anymore? I'd love to see your current writings, if you have any!
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