Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: on platform one...
26th Oct 2013 1:15am
re: Re: on platform one...
26th Oct 2013 2:03am
It was actually written
to my son, as the train
pulled away taking him
to his first term in
university in York...
which seems so
far away...
to my son, as the train
pulled away taking him
to his first term in
university in York...
which seems so
far away...
Re: on platform one...
26th Oct 2013 4:46am
aww... this is such a sweet piece.
your son should read this... it has touched me.
Great Piece!
Darker
your son should read this... it has touched me.
Great Piece!
Darker
0

re: Re: on platform one...
26th Oct 2013 4:52pm
Re: on platform one...
Anonymous
27th Oct 2013 4:29am
The feeling is much too familiar, you want to grasp with all your might and not let go.

0

re: Re: on platform one...
28th Oct 2013 11:07pm
Re: on platform one...
27th Oct 2013 7:33pm
re: Re: on platform one...
28th Oct 2013 11:14pm
Re: on platform one...
28th Oct 2013 11:03pm
re: Re: on platform one...
28th Oct 2013 11:16pm