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20th Jan 2011 00:27am
B-but that's not on everything, that's just a bunch of words, correct me if I'm wrong but the placement is even squiffy. 'Hope is as dinosaur.'
I understand the condemnation of the 'gods' reference but the rest doesn't translate to me and maybe that's just that I'm a little slow and need enlightening but this did nothing for me.
I understand the condemnation of the 'gods' reference but the rest doesn't translate to me and maybe that's just that I'm a little slow and need enlightening but this did nothing for me.
20th Jan 2011 00:30am
apologies, typo, now corrected. It means nothing, no placement of the extinct or damn-right unreal... it plays no part in the idea...that something might be either absent or misplaced with a brown-tipped grin.
20th Jan 2011 00:35am
20th Jan 2011 5:43am
its definitely interesting.. question for "hope is a dinosaur" did you mean that hope is ancient and therefore like a dinosaur..just curious
huge, but antiquated and outdated, "or worse" mythologized and/or something you serve? summin' it up, Jamie? good capsulating. [:
20th Jan 2011 7:42pm
Anonymous
1st Feb 2011 10:34pm
reading some of you poems. this is definitely the most interesting I've come across so far... but i like it!
